Great fic, I love how descriptive it is! Kudos!

Serious yum factor with this story! Well done!

Yay! The rest of this sentence isn't appropriate. :)

Woah! I havent seen one of these in a LONG time. I sure am i glad i checked cause that was fresh and smutty...just the way i like it. I would try to publicize this more, i guess put it on ur profile and tell the viewers to read it... loved it and cant wait for more...