Oh I love this version of naruto. And kabuto! Hes stillcreepy but he is..better. I am amazed he was naruto's friend and I am all for him turning to naruto's side.:D this is fantastic only naruto could have a hunter ninja turned. This is what the anime could have been.

This was so absolutely hilarious I just can't. I am literally unable to can. I read this pretty much all at once and I was laughing so much my throat and stomach hurt. It's just so ridiculous, but in such a good, hilarious way, I honestly can't.

sakura, honey, get your priorities straight and stop thinking about dick

I absolutely love this. I actually giggled OUT LOUD reading this. because this was so funny. Just how Naruto manages to influence all these people for the better without quite knowing or understnading and calling them oblivious xD

Hahaha lol Naruto actually thinks that they want a fire brigade. And nobody realises just how pure this kid is.

"bastard offspring of therapy" has me dying

Hahaha this was great!
The consequences of each action and all of the characters' reactions were so funny and it was great to see everything just getting more and more out of control!
It was a fun read and I absolutely loved it!

Fight scenes only work in written form unless each action serves a purpose. Which is a fact that unfortunately, many Naruto fanfic writers don't understand.

Don't worry about your style in the slightest.

Okay, this already has me completely hooked. Good characters, ACCURATE characters, and an impressive amount of thoughtful detail that despite being an amateur writer myself, I find would be completely beyond me.

Not only that, but for a first chapter, it did an excellent job of hooking readers. It feels like a natural thing to turn the page rather than an actual decision to keep reading.

The only thing that could possibly ruin this is if you somehow miss the point of Naruto (the series) somewhere along the way, but given how REFINED Naruto(the boy)'s personality is, I highly doubt that will be the case.

kabuto didnt come off creepy to me at all. he just seemed traumatised and neurodivergent. i actually really liked your characterisation of him before i read that a/n.

What a wonderful, joyous comedy of errors!

Naruto's brain is a very strange place

Fantastic Story! It's been a joy to read!
Keep up the awesome work!
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'explosives out of food stuff', well with that info getting out I can see a certain new Akatsuki member wanting to learn more, and accidentally finding out someone still being alive. Itachi gets all confused as well.

Wait, Maito Guy in green spandex? Then... who was the BLUE beast?