Chloe is a very shallow and annoying character. Your protagonist is weak and got no personality. She needs to learn how to stand up for herself.

Ugh, teenagers are so annoying, selfish and so indifferent to people’s suffering, Chloe destroyed Thalia’s reputation out of petty jealousy, now she wants to be chummy with her? Ridiculous... I have zero patience for this plot.

OMG, not only is Chloe invading people’s privacy, judging their lives from a high pedestal, she’s also issuing threats to others... that’s fucked up.

Why is she friends with Chloe? With friends like her, who needs enemies?

I can’t imagine Godric restrained by humans, unless he wanted it, like with the Fellowship episode.

Holy shit. Is she Steve Newlin's daughter!?

Awesome, I really liked this fanfic.

How could you do that to us oml

Oh wow oh wow oh wow. I just read this whole story, and just its so amazing! Goodness, okay now I need to check on that sequel you mention. I love how you started the story with one thing, and ended it the same as the first chapter. Everything in it was perfect. Everything. Even the small detail that you mentioned earlier about him not just vamp speeding out of the FotS. Also the mature scenes, they were exactly how this story needed it to be. I loved how everyone had their faults, you made them seem so real! I liked how the father was a discriminater, because it made the story interesting.I also did not see her step mother thing coming, or the brother being gay but it worked. I loved it!

Yay!

I hare you -.- how could you do that to them!? Pleasue make a sequel that has a happy ending :(

It's funny because, ultimately, both of their fears are real. There are gonna be racists and homophobes wherever you go, whatever century you are in. Thanks for keeping it real!

oh my god i'm crying, the end is so horribly sad, i can't stop the feel, i hope you're going to make a sequel, because i love your story

Awe I really hope she has a chance to say goodbye! Danm you Godric! Make a sequel please

Oh. My. Goodness. Then ending just breaks my heart :(
But anyways, I absolutely loved your story! I read it all in one day, and haven't been able to leave my computer since this morning. I do hope you choose to continue their story. I absolutely love Godric, and I was quite saddened when he died. Great job!