I love icarly its irst one of my favorite one teen nick

sorry for your lose

sorry to hear about your friend though hopefuly time passed has helped heal your heart. This was a very nice story and a good twist in the epilogue. Well done!

tony

Love this!

"He came to one logical explanation. He had swapped bodies with Carly!"
Yes, that's very logical. Haha I didn't mean that to be rude. I like this story so far. :)

I LOVE the plot

very cool story
could have used another chapter before they swap back, but at least you put in a nice ending! sorry for your loss.

keep writing! you have talent!

Cute story, not sure it really needs to be M rated for the content. I didn't love the epilogue but it wrapped things up

I'm so sorry, GREAT story though! Keep writing amigo! ;)

Hi there,

I started to read your fiction and to be honest I have mixed feelings about it. First some positives, which are certainly present :P. The spelling and grammar are good. Not many writers can say that (including myself sometimes :P). Also the concept is fairly original.

However I have the feeling your writing style is kind of messed up. Take the first sentence: "Carly and Freddie were having an argument". That's the way you start a joke not a story. Try to show us what they are arguing about and how physical or verbal the argument is. The second sentence could be replaced by something like this: "They argued a lot like this recently," Also don't kick in open doors like you did in the third sentence.

Also try to flesh the events out a little more. The chapter is a little short this way. The last paragraph is a lot better though.

Liking wat im readin.. Update

funny start! hope to see more soon!

You've just given me a bad idea to do a story like this and, I gotta say, THANK YOU! BTW: update soon!

Love ur icon or whatever picture!