[Dang-
This is well-done, man!

I immensely enjoyed how you portrayed both Jason and Michael; along with how you improvised on the communication between the mute murderers

Not only that, but you kept them in character while showing how they hold a brief show of emotion towards one another. All in one chapter, no less!

All in all, this is a great story, man
Keep up the great work!]

daww adorable killers (weird sounding XD)

Never in a million years did I picture two of fictions most notorious killers being friends. But yet you made it work. Nice work.

I really enjoyed this

awww...its so fluffy and sweet! you should write more often, this is talent! :D

I love, how you can make Michael and Jason all understanding and caring for each other and still manage to keep them in character.

This one's really good _

I like this story. Its so cool how you made Jason and Michael be friends XD

D'awww, that was cute!

Please write more of these!

I really Enjoyed This! Are you planning on making This Longer? I would love to read more!

I thought this was really cute.

Awwwwwwe!