Reviews for On Enemy Territory |
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Zephyr-Sensei chapter 1 . 3/10/2016 This was so awesome! Loved it! |
Yuki Artsa chapter 1 . 12/10/2014 XD HELL YES BRAH 33333 |
alfamky chapter 1 . 7/26/2014 Ahhh yeah totally this was a great read, thanks for the wonderful visuals |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2013 cool story |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2013 "I was wondering if you wanted some chicken?" PRICELESS XD |
A cat called whisper chapter 1 . 8/15/2013 love thiss story, so much detail |
viroi chapter 1 . 8/6/2013 its really good, honestly, one of my favourite fics on these two ;) |
SoulMore chapter 1 . 7/31/2013 FAN! |
AlwenaRin chapter 1 . 5/29/2013 Aw, Kid can be so sweet when he wants to! And Law's parting gift is just as cute :D The end made my day, I'm still laughing my head out! Thanks for this story :D (And I've read your other works : just as nice, I love them!) |
azab chapter 1 . 3/31/2013 I loved it a lot why didnt you countinue it |
Erebos chapter 1 . 2/27/2013 "not very good"? It was the first lemon I've read and I didn't notice it was a first fanfiction. It was according to the personality of both Kidd and Law, and very hilarious thanks to drunk Killer XD and... next chapter? I WANT IT NOW! xD...please :3 P.S.: I'm sorry if there is any mistake U english is not my mother language, as I think you already notice because of what I said first xDU |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/8/2012 Good start just needs some editing! |
DeidaraUlquiorra chapter 2 . 11/8/2012 pun intended at the end there, aye? XDDD Killer you naggy bugger. |
Hotaru Vie Jaegerjaquez chapter 2 . 11/8/2012 Kidd's crew is over-protective hehehehehehe XD I'll look forward for the next chapter... Hope you make it faster and longer |
Guest.124 chapter 2 . 11/8/2012 Nice, though i didn't think you would update this anymore, but i'm really glad that you did! |