Reviews for An Innocent Beauty
Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
great write! Loved it
JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
I've heard of "Amorra", but this is only the first fan fiction I've read for it. I like this, Amon seems in-character, at least for the most part. While I doubt he would have any actual attraction or love for the Avatar, I can see him being torn if he starts to realize what she's like as a person. It was interesting reading about his first real impression of her; I'd have liked it if there was more.

I'm not sure whether Amon actually planned to kill Korra in the series. He does say that he's going to destroy her, but he hasn't been shown to kill any of his victims, I'm guessing because doing so would spark more outrage and resistance. Plus, if he killed the Avatar, she would be reborn as a person with bending; it might be better for their cause if she lived a long life without bending, while they "equalized" the rest of the world.

There were only a couple minor mistakes in this. "Killing her was for the good of the world," I think "was" should be replaced by "would be".

Good job on this. :) Keep writing!