This is really good so far! I love the character dynamics, and you’re keeping them in character really well.
Please continue it!

Oh yeah! Almost forgot! I think meeting Frostbite in the GZ would be awesome! He and the rest of Far Frozen could definitely help with the Vlad problem and be the living (well...er...not living exactly, but you get the point) and breathing proof that ghosts can be good..!

I would also suggest that Walker is not the one they should meet. A LOT of stories have done revelation!fics from this angle. It's getting a bit saturated :') It's up to your plot convenience though. I'm sure that any good writer can make even a saturated idea into an engaging plot :)

Cheers!

Hi! Is there any chance this fic is going to be continued? It's been almost two years but I'm sure it can be done if you want :). Things are just starting to get interesting, you know? Please for the love of all cheesecakes in the world don't keep us hanging... *resists the urge to get down on my knees and beg*

I love Maddie's POV and slow realization when Danny started to take charge. Bet it's a shock for her especially after their last "trip" in Motherly Instinct episode (correct me if I'm wrong- it's the one with Maddie and Danny getting lost in a trip arranged by Vlad). Danny's done such a good job covering up his ghost hunting track (Maddie's usual uh... superiority complex in ghost hunting knowledge and her hilarious "Clingy..." comment in that episode somehow came to mind). I'm glad to have found this fic. Your story has addressed this point very satisfactorily.

So how could anyone think this story stinks? No freakin' way! :D

I have already pressed the "follow story" button below, so hopefully I'll see your pen name on my email soon! Wish you luck in real life and hope you have your muse back for this story.. It has such a great start after all!

WHAT?! NO! CONTINUE! IK IT'S BEEN LIKE 2 YEARS BUT STILL.

Get chapter 4 out already. I like this story and wanna know what happens.

ok, wulf, dora, ammorpho, ghostwriter, frostbite,kempler, dani, oh!oh! and clockwork especially clockwork. this is a great story and I would love to see these characters in it.

Love this story! Looking forward to more updates!

Well it has been another year so I'm really hoping that this means you'll update soon...lol

Ahhhh I rediscovered this story in one of my many "cravings" for a good Danny Phantom story and I knew I'd read it but couldn't remember what happened. I was so excited to read the ending...Yep. lol I really hope you come back to this story, it's really really well written and I'm so curious!

AHEM! It's 2015 now. You should update. Very soon.
o.O
Have a favorite and follow! Nice weapon idea *mischievous smirk* Very clever!
COOKIES FOR EVERYONE! *throws them everywhere*

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

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you have to finish it! i didnt like how you ended it.

I really love this, i blazed through it in about forty minutes or so, so please don't wait a year to update. I love the guilty feel from maddie and how Danny's patience is so thin and I love how you actually make it feel like real science what with him dying and all. Please please update soon

how about Wolfe or Pandora because I really don't care as long the story is raging on