Awesome story!

I loved this. Sadly it seems that charles is destined to be hurt. Great job.

I really, really, really liked reading this. You had a great plot and it was written brilliantly. You did a great job mate, thank you for sharing this with everyone.

You are a talented writer and this is a fantastic story, thank you for sharing it. The plot was good but ended a little abruptly. Keep writing! :-)