This was so, so, very much depressing...but I liked it all the same. It was touching and sweet too. Made me smile a bit even. I really do love your way of writing, you seemed to have put a lot of thought into your story as well as describing things poetically, same as me.

Thank you for writing this and sharing such a lovely story with the world.

Honestly, this was so good I am hungry for more. Should consider adding more to the story.

Ah I want to cry but I'm in a testing area.

oh ma gherd you're gonna make me cry! I've been waiting for Light/Yuna to happen for a long time. I loved this so much and you're writing style is unique(at least to me) in a good way. It seems like I should investigate this dreamwidth of which you speak hm...