perhaps you should add a introduction next time; throwing readers straight the point is not very pleasant to read

More!

Yeah, go Naruto!

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

i really like

very interesting

fantastic story

Ehhh, why did you stop? I know that it's depressing to have Naruto weaker than this (he deserve better) but it's also wrong to change the person in the spot-light. Well, I'll leave it to you. One thing though, you can always give Naruto as important role as this while keeping Aang in the light, all you need is to figure it out how.

this is very interesting, I really enjoy it :D
I like how you make Naruto powerful without really boasting it, most people use Obnoxious description about his power and abilities, Not you though.:D

Can you please continue? It's been about a year! :(

Too bad you decide to abandon the story. Any chance of a rewrite coming soon. Maybe after naruto got his wind training. So he is powerful but not strong to go toad kickass mode? Either way, it was a nice read.

update plz

Awesome next chapter please please please please :)

I totally agree with you. Current Naruto would have no trouble destroying aang the other nation. I mean the gap in speed alone would be too much; if kakashi couldn't see him moving, I doubt anyone in ATLA could see him move. But your writing is good i'm alright with a re-write

Is this a NaruHina oairing since that pairing is my OTP.

Ugh...the chapter altogether is pretty good, but the way he destroyed the drill sucked.

Okay, first look at the size of that thing. It's a humonguos mass of SOLID metal. The Oodoma Rasengan tears through rocks and trees with no problem but with such a huge lump of metal? It'd leave a large dent but would otherwise blow up in Naruto's face. He'd need at least a Sage Mode Rasengan-version.

The second problem is that Naruto immediately knew the weak point of the entire structure. Naruto isn't exactly known for his brilliant analysis of big-ass high-tech (for them) weapons. Or his brilliance in general.

And lastly shinobi can't fly. The wall of Ba Sing Se is obscenely high. If Naruto jumped from the top of the wall even higher into the air without Sage Mode he'd be a goner for sure. Even with Sage Mode he'd feel the impact till the next day.

Please take this into consideration for the rewrite.

great, now Long Feng is free.