This story is so good. It's phenomenal. I love it so much. Please...if you have the time...please expand upon this story. Please.

ah, thats better..

is it me or does this feel almost like some complex poem?

Mmmm *basks in the satisfied inner glow that comes from finishing a good story* Ah, yes...

YES! Good decisions pay off! w I love Alternate Megatron.

Ah; nice touch bringing in the Quintessons. I love how you've incorporated elements of the G1 Transformers into this. I also like the explanation for Megatron's change of heart. I've always felt that an alternate version of a character had to have some kind of reasoning behind it. That is, there had to be a reason why the character turned out so dramatically different from his counterpart. You handled that well, and subtly.

Oh, this is getting good. So good!

Whew! What a ride! Excellent story

This is a very good story.

Lovely story! It was quite fun to see a fatherly Megatron, because I mean really, if he wasn't insane and evil Megs would make an awesome dad.

will there be more? please write more,pretty please? this story is too good to end here.

I am so happy to have stumbled across your writing. I thouroughly enjoyed thus, and believed you portrayed each character in this dimension very well. Great job. :) Are you by any chance going to have a mini story about Jackson in Optimus Primes world, and perhaps a small segment of how the Primes Jackson relayed his story one he returned to his dimension? Cause that would be amazing.

Great story! I'd love to see a sequel to it. And maybe a one-shot showing what happened to the other Jack for the time he was stuck with Optimus and the others.

-Spark

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