LMFAOOOO YOU REALLY MADE A TWILIGHT FANFIC ABOUT 9/11 AHAHAHHA ohgoodness this is too funny. I'll read, but goodness I'll be laughing the entire time I can't believe this story exists shshskkssk.

normally i do not post topic criticism in reviews that being said
1. i like the story in general it is well constructed and has few glaring spelling and grammatical mistakes it is a enjoyable story thus far
2. there is no way bella would be adopted in that short of time maybe a temporary custody or foster care but until her parents (charlie, Renee and Phil) were declared legally dead she could not be "adopted" even by a close relative during that horrible time
3. and this is my worse objection (a) spanking a 14 year old is useless spanking "programs" a child that what they did was wrong bella knew what she did was wrong and only acted on impulse in a way bella punished her for attacking carlisle (b) Edward beat her the first time (right after she threw the rock) then raised the abuse by not just spanking her but 28 swats that is above reason. a spanking is a punishment first explaining the infraction and a measured amount of "strokes" are applied (i have two adult children and i do not think either got 28 strikes total between three(when they were old enough to understand the reason for the spanking) and 8 years old (when they were old enough that they knew what was right and wrong) and before you think i abused my children none of the swats were harder then i would have patted them on the head it was barely hard enough to redden the cheeks) a spanking to a child, when well controlled is a correction reinforced with a little pain, to an adult (bella from your descriptions of her reactions and responsibility) is a humiliating form of bulling
sorry for the rant but i see this tossed around and it angers me
hopefully you will understand this and not just throw "it is just a story" or think i am flaming you. i am not, consider this as an older person trying to teach a younger person not to make the mistakes they have seen others make

Awwwww I'm about to cry.

I want to see Bella fight back, and is Jacob ever going to come into the story

Seriously? What kind of parents would tell their child to get in the building that's totally ruined because a plane just crashed into it... That's a little too unbeliveble ...

a bientot

please update soon! i cant wait for the romance to start! :D Ahahaa XD XX

That is so sad! Only thing that I really don't understand is why Bella keeps calling Carlisle her big brother, even when her mom and dad aren't there. It seems unfair to Carlisle that he has these deep romantic feelings for Bella yet she isn't showing any romantic feelings for him. Bella is a teenager, her hormones should be going crazy, yet she is acting like she only loves him as a family member.
I hope you understand what I mean here.

I'm so lucky to have a supplier as good as you! You always send the good stuff! Withdraw symptoms from my fan fiction addiction are scary! Please keep the supply coming!

Every year I light candles and keep them going for the full 24hrs! I spend the whole day in quiet thought not leaving my house I always take the day off work and I will do all of this every year till I pass on as a sign of respect for all the fallen! By the way I am British but will forever be American in my heart and soul.

Thank you for showing compassion and remembrance for all of the fallen.

poor Carlisle!

your story is really sweet. i enjoy reading it, although i started from chapter 10. i dont know why, i never do it.

Update Soon Please :D PWEEEEEASE?! :)

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