Interesting take too a point. Some of the world building didn’t work, DBZ was a little forced for me. The other big issue I had was the spelling and grammar was a little odd, especially around the dialogue.

that is good. update soon please.

great story so far, keep going

I hope you find motivation to either continue this story or re-write it

Oi! It's been two years now how abouts an update?

Chapters are too short but want to see new chapters the only thing I hope with this story is Ranma doesn't get the bead necklace like his father

i love this story, pleease up date w

very nice story but I have a small error seen below when bulma ranma be available for training in the gravity room describes she said that if vegeta has trained at 100g ranma triniert at 1500g but if he times his bracers the 30 has the gravity he Müster at 3000 g have not trained 1500g: D only a small error is noticed me

keep on writing i like to read what happended next because i am a fan of inuyasha and ranma

i love this.
it sooo fummy but Im not sure why though
plz wright more

I love it! Write more please don't stop.

I come here once every two days at least to check if chapter 8 is out.

Plz add the next chapter! Love it! :D

This is cool, but I've always thought of Ranma as more like Bankotsu, you have to admit, they could be twins.

Dang 3 keep up the great work, hope to see more soon, very fun story so far, thanks for sharing!