This was good, i have no idea whats going on, but kickass job.

You have blown my mind. This is totally cool.

Awesomeeeee

This made me actually laugh out loud: "It was the opposite of his fault. Like if his fault was a red balloon, this would be a plate of green noodles."

All in all, I rather enjoyed this story. I'd like to see more of this storyline, if you ever feel so inclined.

Like if fault was a red ballon this would be a plate of green noodles...oh yeah, those are the good drugs. Funny funny and really good