this tension between zim and membrane is very good and im excited to see where it goes :0!
also. gir is Baby and i love him
ive been following this fic for years and i still love it! very nice job. looking forward to seeing where it’s going! :3

Another great addition

seems they had a pretty good day

and I must certainly agree there isn't much better things to do than hang out with friends and family

Seems Zim managed to give Membrane a bit of a surprise, certainly not an easy thing to do

wonder what's going to happen now?

amazing chapter and I can't wait for more :D

I’ve been reading for a while and I want to say that I love this series! Keep up the great work

This is awesome

well wasn't that a fun adventure

I doubt Zim is ever going to want to go ghost hunting again (though he prolly will since I doubt after that he'd ever want to have Dib go on one alone lmao)

amazing chapter and I can't wait for more :D

Cute chapter!

Loved the newest chapter. Maybe you could have put some lines of dashes up to show that the point of view was switching during the fighting?

well wasn't that a fun little party they had.

ha ha those guys had absolutely no idea what they where walking into

at the very least they don't need to worry about Brandon no more, though I do wonder what Zim is planning to do about his current housing problem?

Amazing chapter and I can't wait for more!

well that certainly wasn't a very friendly ghost now was it ha ha!

I find it funny that Dib knew the cop by name

this was an awesome chapter, and I loved reading it

great work and I can't wait for more!

Ghasts ar col

Cool story bro. Go get those favorites

hmm... I wonder if it's the Voot crash that's got certain people so interested in Dib

and poor Zimmy, he doesn't want to be lonely

This is a very interesting chapter

amazing work and I can't wait for more :D

I love how calming your chapters are. The relationship between these two is just awesome. I love that Zim can talk about this kind of stuff and somewhat brag about how much of a disaster he has been in the past. The way you wrote the scene is very well done. It doesn't take away from the seriousness of the impact such things have had on Zim's life but it feels as though his burden is lessened a bit by sharing honestly. He can finally move forward if he learns to put it in the past and try to be better go forward for himself and not the empire. Keep up the good work! -

Your work is really improving, mate.