Reviews for A New World
Guest chapter 13 . 11/26/2016
Please update this.
DeepIntoTheOcean chapter 1 . 6/7/2016
Will this continue? I "hope" so this fic, as fluffy as it was, gave me happiness and not many things these days can entertained or even keep me happy anymore... thanks for the hard work
tibbsfanatic chapter 13 . 12/15/2015
Man why hasn't this story been updated yet I'm hooked and need to know what's going to happen to hope.
TheEchoingSoul chapter 13 . 3/24/2015
You can't just leave a cliff-hanger like this! Update, for the love of HopeXSnow that I didn't support before reading this!
Iseria211 chapter 13 . 8/1/2014
Great chapter as usual. Poor Hope must have been in a lot of pain from seeing his undead mother. I can't wait to see more of this wonderful story XD
Canna chapter 13 . 7/31/2014
Oops! Hahaha, didn't realize that I didn't log on when I reviewed your story. That guest comment below is from me lol!
Guest chapter 13 . 7/30/2014
Thank you for the update! I love this chapter! I can feel the climax coming to its end soon! I really want to see what would happen. Suddenly the Necromancer didn't seem all that bad, not because of Hope's mother, but because of the way he act towards Hope. Of course, I still hope for Snow and hurry and get the silveret before anything bad happens.

Look forward to seeing your next update!
Iseria211 chapter 12 . 6/6/2014
Ajajskjasjiijdkc... Poor Hope... or Snow? Idk. It's one thing after another with Hope and Snow gets it worst worrying about Hope. God I love this pairing. I hate you with a passion of a thousand suns for the cliffie btw ;)
ashley.herrera.16547 chapter 12 . 6/6/2014
Amazing story love it keep it up
BlondIsHot chapter 12 . 6/4/2014
Ouch! That must've hurt... a lot! OMG your cliffhangers r too much. Why do you do this to me? I am glad that Hope is himself again and I get some cute SnowxHope moments _
Canna chapter 12 . 6/4/2014
Finally! Thank you so much, I miss this story! Glad that Hope's finally back! I can't wait to see how things will turn out from here!
Egg Emperor chapter 2 . 3/31/2014
This story is wonderful so far. I loved the previous one and now that the sequel is following it's own story direction, its even better. I love the characterizations and the interaction between the characters.

That being said, this story and the previous one contain many grammatical mistakes. Often it's as simple as improper use of a tense or the use of plural vs. singular. Some are more complex for example.
"You mean whatever thing that had been killing the team came from in there?" Would be better rendered as
" You mean that the thing that killed the team came from in there?" or " You mean that whatever had killed the team came from in there?" There are others. I will note that the mistakes an neither so large nor so frequent that they prevent the story from being read, they do however detract from the experience and a bit of annoyance. I would suggest reading over each chapter after you finish. Most mistakes can be caught simply by a quick simple read through.
Again I'm sorry to be such a picky person but I hope that by being constructive and not just bashing you on it I'm of some help and not just a nuisance.
Sincerely,
- Johannes The Egg Emperor
Gabe Mason chapter 11 . 3/27/2014
Can't wait for more, honestly! Update some day, please?
oblivion9032 chapter 11 . 10/31/2013
I like this a lot so far! Hope we can see more soon.
ryoko126 chapter 7 . 7/24/2013
Good story. I had been reading these for a little while and I wanted to encourage you to keep it up. I kinda have ideas on what's going on, but I wanna see where you go with this yourself. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
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