sasuke falling for a girl so quickly makes me a little angry because it’s like he’s not even focused on Itachi or his self he’s just acting like a little 5 year old brat who has a stick up his ass, And yes you can leave your village and not follow there rules but he should have just left with Orochimaru, at least he made a better deal and made more sense.
Anyways other then that, your story is good and I love the naruhina moments together it’s really cute, I’m also glad there on the same team together, also a huge major thing I love about this is that you didn’t have naruto have that stupid crush on sakura. Also you made him more smarter? Not as dense in the anime, good story!

Okay sorry, your story is good but the whole restore your clan, and acknowledge your fan girls? That part was uncomfortable. First sasuke is only 12 years old he can’t beat Itachi and just paying attention to your fan girls so you can have options in the future shouldn’t be what’s on his mind in the first place. Still your story is good just a really weird thing to read.

lol his sensei killer bee the guy who whooped him

A very interesting au and the first team I've seen with suigetsu

Sad to see it go, but I guess it must. Good show, friend!

Not bad story, like it but making other sequal/book to it very much ruin it for me a lot. I gave it a chance (glad i did) but it kill most of joy of reading cause i know it not over. 3/5 stars.

Great end. Curious to see how the story continues to develop!

You should continue this. The world here is very interesting and shouldn't come to an end.

Bravo! This was such an exciting journey. Thank you for creating it!

Hope hiashi did not give shishui's eye.
And I always thought that naruto should have gotten the sharingan- the one from itachi.
And if danzo had really wanted the best for lonoha, giving him something that would be good to keep his qb under control would be good- even if naruto had no idea to use it on kurama.

nice end up i would like to see a conetue though there does seam to add alot of foreshadowing though

Nice chapter. Can't wait until your next update.

I was hoping for a moment in the seal- a conversation between haku, yagura and naruto and the 2 biju.

Naruto learned a harsh lesson on this night. Bijuu extractions are fatal, but Yagura deserved his fate.

That does make me sad. Hopefully somebody with as much talent as you gets the chance to pick it up and takes said chance. Good chapter, m'friend!

Keep up the good work!