So are they back together or what? You gotta do a sequel

No, she can't be gone, she can't be...
T_T

Please don't let either die.

I'll say though that the dashes do seem out of place and unnessassary.

Halfway through, and I'm already on th edge of my seat.

No, don't take them apart. They need each other.

Well that escalated quickly by the end.

Good start. I'm curious to where this may go...

Great story, I like it a lot ~

Well I thing it was amazing! Whoop whoop it was soo interesting and it would be epic if you did a update :D

It's not Mario its Maria

I really hope you post a continuation to this story, because, it is so good. I just read it toady and I enjoyed it, the whole idea. It kept me on the edge, not knowing what will happen next. Pls continue

I like it really good keep it up (•)

Cool story nice conclusion . I like the background story on Meg too

Pretty well written with a strong premise. My wife keyed me to a new Burst Angel and we love this anime :P My only nitpick would be not using " for dialogue. But it's my only thing to mention :P Good story!