At the beginning of this story I enjoyed the group’s playfulness Ginny’s and her family really ruined it. Even with the older boys insistence when push comes to shove Harry is “not family”. I’m sure if Harry had asked for Azkaban or dementors kiss for Ginny they wouldn’t be all ‘we are sorry’ bullshit.

Great story

Well 20 years bound to the barrow no wand rights hahah. Better then life in Azkaban I guess.

The Weasley’s are fair weather friends. The whole he is like family was all lips service.

That’s ridiculous Rons nothing compared to Harry and the signs where that he was the one with the problem. Can’t they see if he acts like this with one team member he’ll act like that if he ends up having problems with others. Ugh

I guess signals were missed. Tho I can see were everyone was just expecting Ginny and Harry to get together to bad no one told Harry that. Seriously he saw her as ex girlfriend that’s it. They need to get over it. Loving the drama

I have to admit I’m happy there is an OC character for Harry (I’m not a Ginny fan) but in this chapter Elinora ticks me off acting like a pussy. Harry needs someone made of sterner stuff like Tonks and her mom. Still glad Harry has more options then Ginny

Well that’s good to know! His power surge plus tapping into the deathly hallows power and since Harry doesn’t actually need a wand he can’t really be disarmed.

bonne fic!
je m'attendais a une conversation dans au chaudron pour la trahison!
c'étais inattendu.

I think, if I were Harry and Nora, I would take Andromeda and Teddy and put some distance between our little family and the Weasleys. Hermione is too intrusive into Harry's life; she thinks she has a right to tell him what to do and to comment on everything. She always has done this, and it is unacceptable, now that he is an adult.

Ron is nearly as bad in many stories. He is jealous and envious of Harry and any good thing that has happened to him. I do not sense that from your Ron, although I do sense that he has expected Harry to marry Ginny, along with the rest of the Weasleys. Then again, so has Hermione. There should be fireworks ahead.

I'm glad Andromeda is in favor of Harry/Nora.

I don't know how you see them all, as you seem to view Dumbledore as a benign figure in Harry's life. I do not; I see him as having aided and abetted in the Dursleys' abuse of Harry. I also see him as having led Harry into all of the dangers he faced at Hogwarts. I'm not a Dumbledore fan, obviously.

"Sometimes Elinora came down to watch him WHY he worked ..." This should read "WHILE he worked."

"Harry was sitting on the floor with Teddy why he chewed on one of his toys ..." Should read "... WHILE he chewed on one of his toys."

I've noticed you have used WHY when you should use WHILE in several places in this story.

"... they all talked why they ate." This should read "... WHILE they ate."

"... Harry was heading to Andromeda's place why she took Teddy home." Again, this should read "... WHILE she took Teddy home."

"The Grangers sat there looking completely shocked at what their daughter had been doing why they were in Australia ..." This should read "... WHILE they were in Australia ..."

Again, be careful not to use WHY when you should use WHILE.

"... it basically went into me why his killing curse backfired onto him making his body disappear but alive." Once again, this should read "... WHILE his killing curse backfired onto him ..."

"But I only heard it for the first time why we were away." Again, this should read "... WHILE we were away."

"David looked stunned why Mr. and Mrs. Granger looked confused." This should read "... WHILE Mr. And Mrs. Granger looked confused."

Be careful not to use WHY when you should use WHILE.

"... making the older Weasley's laugh again why Ron looked shocked." This should read "WHILE Ron looked shocked." Be careful not to mix up WHY and WHILE.

"So why Hermione and Ron went to pick up the Grangers, Harry spent ..." This should read "So WHILE Hermione and Ron went ..." Be careful not to mix up WHY and WHILE.