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Poor moona awww :(

This was a really sad chapter she couldn't do anything for moona instead she was forced to
Leave her cause she couldn't find her poor Ashoka I hope Jase finds her soon.

This was a great chapter it was perfectly detailed and captured the moment perfectly this was a sad, Gruesome chapter and Ashoka full of hope couldn't do anything to help prevent another death poor Ashoka I hope she realizes it isn't her fault someone died.

Again a great chapter sad and terrifying please update soon this was great I atcually felt sick reading this not in a bad way but just by how much bad news there is here.

Great chapter, that chapter was somewhat intense and I hope ahsoka will make it out alive. Update Soon. :)

Wow this is very sad poor moona poor girl she's gone ;-(

I liked this chapter it was good but I still don't know when Jase left Ashoka to go into the temple?

But still a good chapter and I hope chapters 4-5-6 are the end to this story cause this is very good.

I'm scared for Ashoka hope she lives anyways please update and don't kill her! :-D

awesome chapter, oh no i hope moona and ahsoka can escape b4 vader can kill them. Update Soon. :)

Coolstory so far!

This was a pretty intense chapter but I don't understand the continuing remarks of crimson but I digress

This is a very powerful chapter and jase should be careful not to lose Ashoka he should talk to her after there done with this that would be a great thing to show how great their relationship is by that they can talk to one another

Anyways please update and keep up the good work

great chapter, i hope ahsoka lives and is alright. Update Soon. :)

Suspense! Love it!
Update Soon!

Good work so far please continue

Fabulous start! Like how you really put feeling and a bit of anguish into the story really inspiring. Just a suggestion but you should make Ahsoka fall to the dark side then have a particular someone pull her back and then so on. Anyways I loved it!
Update soon!

awesome chapter, i hope ahsoka doesnt go 2 the dark side. Update Soon. :)

This is a great set up I like the detail and the feeling it has it sounds like a great story

Overall a great introduction

Please update soon and keep up the good work