Reviews for Focus On Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah as a musician I find the violin bow part just wrong... If someone tried to use my cello how in foreplay bitch you're gonna get damn murdered. It's just... No, just no. Other than that I loved it. EEP soooo cute and sexy and ofmjsksm |
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![]() ![]() Brilliant |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was excruciatingly beautiful! Your delicious, tormented, introspective Sherlock is fantastic! Please do tell us there will be more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Beautiful! Xela |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omfg you win all the other sub!Sherlock's go home now wow that was amazing you are a fantastic writer |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't help wondering if it was Irene's crop... New take on the relationship, but i liked it! |
![]() ![]() Aaa! Write more sub!Sherlock and dom!John, please, please, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stunning piece. Thank you so much for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this fic a lot. Honestly you did an awesome job... But why in the world did you think treating a violin bow like that was acceptable? It would rub off the rosin, not only that but it would also make the strings dirty which would basically mean the whole bow needed to be replaced! Such cruelty to bows makes me sick. (hehe ignore that rant, Awesome story!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, I really, really like dom! John, really, ok, you've written SUCH a good piece here, ugh, ok, in love with you right about now KEEP WRITING MORE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the kinky fun. It was very well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is gorgeous. Really freaking fantastic. There's not only a lot of sexy, sexy smut to it, but there actually is a MEANING behind all that, and this little fact makes it extremely precious. I like the way you described Sherlock's feelings best; it's like a view into his soul, and it took my breath away. I'm usually not someone for SM-stuff at all; but I really, really enjoyed this little ficlet. (*cough* fucklet. *cough-cough*) One thing that bothered me; not a big deal really, but you might have the well-known facepalm-feeling when you hear it: John is actually left handed. But that really is just a minor disturbance to the epic story you produced. I'm putting you on author alert right now, because if one-shot was so impossibly gorgeous, how good will longer stories of you be? I have to check that out. And I desperately hope you'll produce lots and lots more diamonds like this. Yours, adoringly, Annie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okey...This was much far away that what I even ever think about... It was awesome!The feelings of Sherlock..I felt it so real! And was sooooo hot! I it! To favorites! Hope read you soon!D Kissess PS. Sorry for my bad English...I'm from Argentina and I speak Spanish...U |