AWWWWWWWW that was perfect.

Aww, this was perfect and I loved and enjoyed every single word of it. Thank you for such a great story!

SOOOOOO AMAZING! I LAUGHED AND I WANTED TO CRY LOL! I LOVE IT!

This is super duper cute. (: And I kindof reallyreally love it.

Awww that's extremely sweet that it awfully ached my heart :')

DAWWWWW 10/10

Awwww. This was adorable.

Beautiful (:

How? How are you able to write this so perfectly and in character and making me want to just burst out into emotional Tokka tears?

I love it.

The banter. The humor. The hurt. The emotion. The questions.

It was all perfect.

SO PERFECT.

And Aang's awkward don't crush the tiny baby hug made me laugh aloud. XD

Also. the hippopatomas sloth was perhaps the most hilariously beautiful animal ever to exist in this universe. It's sooooooooooo perfect. Goodness.

I'm so glad you're writing some! :3 And it looks like you're starting to get a bit of a following for Avatar fics.

this is wonderful. and it captures everything i love about the relationship between sokka and toph perfectly. even if sokka isn't lin's biological father, i have no doubt he had a presence in her life, and an important one. and the way you wrote the beginning of that is beautiful. also love sokka using toph's competitive nature to help her during her birthing process. excellent job.

This was extremely cute, and you should feel good. Your writing is really good. :D

so perfect. literally tearing up! i reblogged this on tumblr, but UGH my FEELS so perfect (':

This was so amazing. You're right, no matter who Lin's father is, Sokka is one of the men who would always be around Lin. Such cuteness, and I can't wait for more.

i is confuzzled
whos the dad?
also:
NEEDS TO BE CONTINUED

I love what you wrote here. Its so dramatic.