Reviews for Inevitable
Crystaal chapter 3 . 12/31/2014
This is awesome and you NEED to make more!
Skendo chapter 3 . 11/5/2014
Haha thought it was going to be Cub :D Can't wait for an update :) Would be cool to see K-Unit seeing Alex as a teenager with Tom :D
IfINeverKnew chapter 3 . 10/3/2014
We want more, we want more - said the angry gruppe of people. And a small voice was heard 'please'
yashendra2797 chapter 3 . 6/17/2014
yup mate, my hands are up... i was expecting alex. i would love to read more! update soon...
mkoneill816 chapter 3 . 6/13/2014
I can't wait till you update again!
InArduisFidelis-RAMC chapter 3 . 6/11/2014
Already have our whiner and bossy boots in K unit, so what we are clearly missing is a stuck up know it all who always does everything by the rule book.
Wolfwind97 chapter 3 . 6/10/2014
Cool story! Update soon, please! Yes, I was expecting Cub, but now I'm interested to see what Johnston will do. Trait I'd hate in a person... hmm, that would probably be when someone thinks they're better than everyone else.
GladToBeAbnormal chapter 3 . 6/7/2014
This is an awesome story! Name Johnston either Rat, Skunk or possibly Leech.
Atheriia chapter 3 . 6/6/2014
Ooh great chapter and I was totally expecting Cub but am pleased it's Johnston;) I hope he's super arrogant and obnoxious! I can't wait for the next chapter and some more development into what Alex has been doing as well. Great job!
RedRua chapter 3 . 6/6/2014
Johnston should believe that he's always right, even when he knows he's wrong, he's right.
Niniveh chapter 3 . 6/6/2014
Haha, Bet every one of us expected Cub!
Johnston has already become an obnoxus person, and we haven't even met him yet... I hate loud-mouthed arrogance, and enjoy watching such people either fall face first in the mud or consistently unknowingly making the same mistake in a foreign language that everyone else speaks better (the subtle intellectual punishment).

Cheers,
Nini
Guest chapter 3 . 6/6/2014
I have a /good/ trait I'd like to see Johnson have-
He is an acquaintance of Alex- helps him with paperwork after a mission or something- and worries about him because Alex is so young. Alex tolerates his flaw because he misses having someone fussing over him since Jack died, but they aren't particularly close.
I don't have any real ideas for Johnson's bad traits though- maybe he has a huge sex drive but he gets really uptight if he doesn't get bedded enough, or maybe he is patronising to people who he feels haven't proved themselves yet.
Anyway, please have Johnson like Alex?

Oh, and by the way I really love how you avoided the clichés. I love being surprised!
Platero chapter 3 . 6/5/2014
Very good chapter, I expected a Cub. Johnston already hate me imagine a cocky agent, envious, and Alex can not stand this man has a personality close to treason as Ash.
Update soon.
good story chapter 3 . 6/5/2014
I thought you abandoned it
Guest chapter 3 . 6/5/2014
Wow, I really, really thought that it would be Alex/Cub, I trait that I have found extremely annoying is when someone always has to be better then everyone else. Even when it is so impossible it isn't funny.
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