very good

Kaito is hungry wants to eat

"Does this mean we can call him a child since he called himself one?" I thought this line was funny. Since I am 22 years old 16,17, 18, 19 years are children to me just because I feel oldI liked this story. The scenes between Ryoma and Ryoga were cute and funny. I liked Aya too, I was sad to see her go but she had been waiting for peace for a long time.

I like the ending with Ryoma snickering before blacking out. It's so Ryoma-like.

I liked the interaction between Ryoma and Aya. The part of him and Eiji in the same blanket was cute too.

As soon as someone told me there was a ghost I would have ran out. Forget my pride, my sanity is more important. Oh no I hope Ryoma is alright, I would've comforted you but I'm not there Ryoma-kunI can't promise you to protect you because as soon as I see a ghost I ran out for dear life.

Nanjiro assuming Ryoma did something illegal because he was talkative made me laugh. It reminded me of an episode of the series where Ryoma was teasing Inui (I think) and he tells him he was being talkative that day which made him shut. I mean how do people expect the kid to be more sociable if every time he is being talkative someone reprimand him. Just enjoy it while it last.
The family scene was sweet but it turned sour when it says it could be their last one.
I loved the Ryoma and Ryoga brotherly moment when they share the bed. Ryoma always keeps his promises hehehe

Ryoga had no idea what he got himself into. Ryoma and Ryoga finally had a sweet brotherly moment with no fightsI wonder who the woman and girl are and how they know Ryoma

Aww Ryoma is happy to see his brother though he won't admit it. That's so like him. I chuckled when Ryoga followed Ryoma around and he took his bag. I chuckled thinking about Ryoma's schoolmates' reactions to see him running after an older version of himself.
I think it's cute when the students confused Ryoga for Ryoma. I can see it happening when Ryoma gets older and taller. They look very alike after all.

Ryoga didn't come up as abusive to me, your representation is not any different from the way his father and regulars treat him :D but poor Ryoma he never catches a break from the people in his life. It makes a fun read though.

I like the beginning it wasn't boring because it was funny. I am like Ryoma I loved winters too.

Oh my gosh I seriously found myself passionately yelling and clapping at the end. XD You know like when you see a really good movie in the theater and then at the end everyone starts clapping and yelling? That's exactly what I did. XD This is amazing.

I seriously can't believe that this fic has been on here for 2 years... Happy late 2nd anniversary for this fic! Yes, it was so awesome that it needs an anniversary. ;D

Btw, the last chapter is called, "ENding It". I was wondering if the first two capitalized letters in "Ending" meant something or if it was just a typo. Thanks ;D

Great story, nice ending :D.

Umm, I think Hiyoshi is a Hyoutei character... forgive me if you posted it somewhere or if I am wrong... Anyway I really like your story X3! Fight-o!

Lads was perfect o

That was a rally interesting stroy!thanks for the hard work!