absolutely beautiful. i like how you found a story that captures each sister's personality so accurately. well done. and your writing is great. keep it up!

I really loved this fic, with the ties to diff. stories for each of the sisters. I felt that The stories chosen fitted them perfectly. well done in capturing the essence of the crawley sisters! It was marvellous. :)

Very well chosen, all of the tales. I like how you explored canon with this one. Cant wait to see more from you! :)

Very nice. It is a bit of a twist but it fits Mary well. I like how you took it farther past the myth, after she had "drowned" instead of just ending it at her being trapped with Carlisle.

If you ever feel like it, you should try and do more characters! I love your character analysis and how you tie it in with the fairytales/myths.

Great chapter though I have to admit I like the other better but that could be because I like Sybil and Edith more than Mary. I like how Mary keeps going back to others myths and in the end realizes that like myths her story can be rewritten.

You have an amazing talent! I mean the way you showcase the characters in the story is so different, yet it really captures the characters. Bravo!

When I saw that this chapter was based on The Ugly Duckling I immediately thought that this chapter was going to be about Edith. So image my surprise when I discovered this chapter was about Sybil!

I really enjoyed this chapter! I loved your interpretation of the book! I never thought of the book in those terms but I think that this is the way everyone should interpretate.

I love the fairytale concept (although I'm a bit biased...:)) but one thing I noticed was that you spelled the youngest Crawley's name as Sibyl, when the correct spelling is actually Sybil. Otherwise very interesting, however.

Really cute and clever idea for a story! You make the fairy tales match up so well to the sisters.

This is so adorable! I can really see a young Sybil taking on the ugly duckling as her favorite story and the ending with Tom is so apt. Then Edith. I've got a soft spot for Edith, so I love the way you've described her as the perfect daughter. I'm really interested to see what you write for Mary! :)