Lovely xxx

truly beautiful. I loved how you kept loki's character

This is amazing :) i have fallen down a hole of Loki/OC recently and this is by far the best oneshot i have seen, it is so in character and i love it, the ending made me sad though XD

loved this

Loved it!

Perfect. Just perfect. That's what a good Oneshot is supposed to be like. Great story and although the story has so few words, the feelings are there, especially in the last sentence, and the storyline as well. Great, just great.

This was amazing. I love Lois and occasionally stories!

My initial reaction was realization. The realization of what the fic was saying. Then I shed a few tears, refusing to cry any more because I'm sick and I can barely use my nose as it is. Then I reminisced on how much of a monster Loki is. A true selfish monster.. I love him though. This fic was good. I enjoyed it :)

god dAMN IT THAT ENDING
it killed me you cant do that and make me feel all happy with their cute banter and then all of a sudden kill her god
i did love it tho

That was ok

very cute and sweet!

Ohhhhh. That was so mean! My heart hurts! Thanks... I guess?

Beautiful.

This was the only fanfiction that I ever read that actually made me cry. I've written 'I'm crying' before. But I was just depressed. This is beautiful and I think I'm holding back tears because I'm in math class. But it's just too hard. Five Stars. 100% I don't even know, man. But this story is just wonderful.

Wow, you put so much in so short story. Great job!