My goodness, this was adorable! I really did enjoy reading it, very cute and well-written :)

Haha, this is awesome. I can so imagine Mello being that annoying kid that never leaves you alone. The part where L was a goner as soon as Mello cried was so cute though. XD I always felt that as bad as L's social skills are, he probably has an affinity for kids. I don't know, people who are weird like that always strikes me as somehow good with kids... unless they're an ax crazy murderer of course.

Lovely story, once again!

so cute :D

D'awwww, that was so cute! I actually love the fluffy fics where L and Mello are like brothers or father/son. Very, very nice; I like it. Thank you for making my day.