who the fuck is bills

Lol. Imagine if Bulma really did take out Cell with that. Holy fuckin shit that'd be crazy. No Gohan SSJ2 or even Goku or Raditz. Fucking Bulma.

When Vegeta fucked up, he was punished for it. I hope Break is punished as well. Dont hold back just vecause she is ur oc

Minor nitpick: If Turles isn't completely outclassed by SSJ Gohan, Slug should be easy pickings for him. Turles seems a couple classes higher than Slug.

not a fan of zarbon trunk...

I like 2 who never seen or fight against each other is fighting in planet they never been to. cool writting.

Aha! Goku introducing Gohan to his own Uncle he's never met before was the most Goku thing in the world...the way he did it anyhow.

WTF is "awwlp" ? That spelling just pissed me off so badly...

I know it's far, far, FAR too late to chime in with this, but the best music to have playing when they attack would have been "Libera me from Hell" ala Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann; giant ship, carrying the best "good" guy fighters (who's power seems to often be greatly affected by emotion, fighting spirit, willpower, etc), going into a different dimension (universe), to fight a seemingly all-powerful enemy that is hell-bent on ending all life other than themselves? That's pretty much spot on for TTGL!

...right, that's all I had to say; carry on~!

It was a bad idea to reveal Ki to the world. Who knows what criminals will do with it.

Ah geez, rookie mistake; never leave the bodies of the enemy unattended/untaken care of; for all they know, there could be a Super Cell showing up

well i don't entirely agree on piccolos power in the main series he has a power of 3500* With Gohan if anything without the distraction he should have been in the 4300 range

This is the point where power levels become be.

After re-reading this story I just noticed that in the end, after everything that's happened, Raditz still died just like he did in canon; by having a hole blasted through his torso.

So you are making Tien the MC in this since Goku is so weak here?