Deep moving and beautiful. Good job.

Awh so sad. Ive never felt much for zelda but i feel really sorry for her after this :/

Oh my god, this was so beautiful. breathtaking even! thank you so much for sharing :)

Beautiful work! The little details were what made it, and the last bit was especially heartfelt. I really do hope Zelda and Link can be happy together, despite all that happened. Thanks for writing this! :)

I don't often leave reviews for stories as I don't come across many that prompt me to do so, but yours did.

There's so much power and emotion in this short one-shot; it's quite special how well you were able to captivate and string me through so many different emotions in so few words.

As I was reading the last couple of lines, I nearly cried, and literature hardly ever strikes such a chord in me.
There was just something so amazing about your descriptions, your word choice, and your elegant way of weaving together Zelda and Hylia that blew me away.

This was a fantastic piece of work, and you should be very proud! I hope you keep writing, because you've got quite a talent for it :)

I love the content, the character interpretations, every detail, and the way you pinpoint Hylia and her "Zelda ratio" . I appreciate a lot that you don't pretend they are two different people.
The relationships, the descriptions, and the sweet gentle flow of the narrative have swept be off my feet. It is something I never thought could have happened with a romance fanfiction told from the first person. But it worked. I love the content.

On the other hand, as much as the simplicity of the vocabulary and Zelda's flowery, precious speech, on the verge of cheesy, reflects her appearance and demeanor in the game, and as much as I enjoy the bluntness and freshness; I also find the choice of the words a little too much naive. "I love you Link." That's not my kind of lines. But this is only a matter of personal tastes.

Honestly, If my list was not so long that I had to be very restrictive not lose count of the entries, I would have faved this story, if only to for the bluntness and Hylia's character presentation.

If what you said is true about how this piece reflects the tone you will adopt for the sealing scene, there shall be many tears shed all over my laptop. You have a wonderful grip on Zelda's personality and conflict, and I can't wait to see how you handle the resolution of her heartbreak. So far, you have delivered the perfect angle on the Zelda/Link love story: low on cheese and high on emotional depth. Best of luck on Chapter 9; you can do it!

Oh... ohhhhhh... SOOO much flufffff...

Just what I needed.

Worded perfectly, expresses emotion I could actually see Zelda/Hylia (Take your Pick) having... Perfect one shot... Just the thing I need for good dreams before I hit the hay.

From reading all your story reviews, I have come to the conclusion your fans are crazy. They are all very willing to lock you in their closets and keep you as a pet. Wish I had your fans. *eyebrow wiggle of doom*

Great story :)

Wow. This was amazing. You could almost feel her grief and sadness in this, as well as the happiness from her memories. I really liked this! You are a fantastic writer and used great imagery. I look forward to seeing more from you!

-Leila

Wow. That was incredible. I love your writing style! You portray Zelda's emotions so clearly, and it's heartbreaking. Especially that third to last paragraph, when she says "It's the punishment I deserve. A thousand years of watching you break, knowing that I had been the one to build you up in the first place." As the reader, I can feel Zelda's pain and guilt, and the whole time I'm reading I just want to cry!

So anyway, great job! And I'm really looking forward to the next chapter of Sky Child, even if it's going to be sad. :)

AWWWWWw :,(

Oh my God, I'm literally crying. That last line... AW GAWD. MY EMOTIONS. THEY'RE BLEEDING BUT IN A GOOD WAY.

Oh my gosh. That was so beautiful. I'm not even joking when I say that I'm crying right now. I'm not even sure what to say about this. There really aren't words to describe it. This, my friend, is talent.