Hhhh this story is so good! Please continue it!

You did a really great job. I don't normally ship Spamano, but now I can't wait to see what happens next!

This is a really good story! It's an interesting take on Lovino's short temper combined with the inability to see. Antonio is going to have a lot of fun the next time Lovino visits. How is Antonio and Lovino's jobs going to surface in this relationship? Will it be a huge catalyst that may ruin or further whatever relationship they have? It must, though, otherwise their jobs wouldn't really be that significant to the plot. It's very thought-provoking.

It's shame that this is wasn't updated since last yeah, haha... It might be a bit selfish of me to want this, but I really hope this updates in the near future! You mentioned that you have college in the A/N, though, so I encourage you to focus on your work before you throw yourself in jeopardy. Good luck!

This is a very interesting story, quite vivid - I can definitely imagine these two around San Francisco in cable cars and all the steep hills! Great setting, great premise, I can't wait to see where you go with this!

This is absolutely brilliant. I'm hooked.

The characterization is superb and the descriptions are just... No words.

Also, yes it's so hard to describe colors to someone who's never seen or will see them. Color is a visual thing. Much effort on Antonio's part to help Lovi understand.

Update when you feel like it lovely!

Nique

I hope Gil produces Lovi's book into a movie

I want to be able to write like this some day.

The horse thing was sooooo cute! I can't wait until you continue! :D

DUUUUUUUUUDE I LOVE THIS! I AWAIT YOUR NEXT CHAPTER!

OMG you updated! You have no idea how happy I was when I saw this update! I totally freaked out! This is a really great story, so it would be a shame if you didn't finish it eventually. I can wait as long as it takes though! I totally get it that school is hard, so it's fine that it took a while for you to update. Lovino was so adorable in this chapter I can't handle this! XD He's so cute OMG! How is he even this cute I can't even! *cough cough* anyway... Thank you so much for updating, and I look forward to the next chapter whenever you may be able to put it up! :)

Please please please please por favor mi amigo...continue the story. Like seriously I love the first chapter and it's intriguing and original and I just love Spamano so please for the love of all tomatoes continue this story and I swear I will stand by this story till the very end! :D

Ooooh this chapter 3 don't worry about the updates, you just focus on what you feel you need to : we won't rush you, so just take things your own pace :3 wonderful chapter, good luck with college

Meh *shrugs* just not into it anymore.

Aww, I didn't know horseback riding could be so cute! I hope we see Lovino and Antonio going faster next time, I'm pretty sure Lovi would have some funny reactions to that lol.

Till next time.

I think I read this a while back, so I'm glad that it's been picked up again! This is a really great story, and I like your writing style. The way you write all of the character interactions is really sweet and well done, especially the ones between Lovino and Antonio. Your dialogue writing is very natural and smooth. The concept is interesting, and I can't wait to read what happens next!