dim my friend you worry too much on some things. trust in yourself never doubt yourself. and if all else fails return to our old meeting place. invite your friends. the leader of the mutant kaiju knights and the leader of the destroyerian empire will reunite once more. love the story by the way. an remember this always. FALSE gods FALL BY MY BLADE!.

I loved your fic, I look forward to the following chapters

Hi! It’s been awhile, and I apologize for putting this off for so long- it just ended up becoming one of the stories I couldn’t get to reading during my…hiatus.

But I’m back now, and I shall read this chapter and review it properly, and maybe I can probe out a little inspiration in the end. :D

Right away, I’m already in love with Silver’s characterization. I like the little insights into his friendship with Blaze and his fighting style. It provides such a contrast to the other characters and sets him apart from the rest. You don’t see enough stories like that capitalizing Silver in that light. And you nailed his reactions with Shadow, as I thought Shadow was perfectly enough in character, given the circumstances. At the time of 06, I’d expect Shadow to be more of a strong convictionist (not a real word) than a brooder anyway, and it works brilliantly here. Shadow’s characterization is perfectly believable, so I don’t think you have anything to worry about.

I enjoyed the Sonic vs Blaze fight. It could’ve been a little more descriptive in my opinion, since it felt a little empty at points, but it was also simple and got the job done, so I can’t complain, especially since I was very interested into the little tidbits of Blaze’s past that are brought up. I want to know more about this. :D

And as usual, your endings leave me pining for more! A worried Blaze, everyone agreeing to work together, the potential start of a World War III…if only the real Sonic 06 had been this epic! I’m honestly loving your take on all this, even after all this time, which shows that your writing stands up to the test of time and serves to still impress. One day I hope to find out more about Eggman’s plan and the Flames of Disaster, but I could never ask you to hurry toward an update or anything. :)

But hey, I’ll see you next time, whenever that may be, and know that I love this story, even if our opinions on it tend to clash…pretty often. XD

IT'S NO USE! another great chapter!

wow, so far im impressed! i like it! cant wait for more!

Epicnesa *-*
Dont worry, Shadow personality is complicated but you are just doing fine :) you keep himlile himself

Awesome. A chapter action-packed with Shadow (argh, his neck snapping like that...), character development for Amy, and now we have an interesting turn of events that I'm looking forward to how they'll play out.

Not much to say this time around, other than the fact that the fighting scenes really blew me away, and I love how well this story is progressing! Catch you next time!

-Child-

Decided to give a review. Hello!

I noticed a few typos.
"I highly doubt that. Your royalty!
(You're)

"To long."
(Too)

Turning around to watch the seen in interest,
(scene)

I called to my female ally, standing ontop
(on top)

The only thing they would to was to point…to these flames."
(they would to was to ?)

Oh, and you can delete all the "now"s for past tense.

It doesn't look too polished.

My favorite part would be the Sonic-Sally moment at the beginning. There's always humor in the dialog and the way they interact. You nailed it perfectly.

I also like the plot so far. Looks interesting and complicated. Adventurous.
You got me curious.

And that's my review.

I really liked this chapter. The way Shadow stood his ground but felt dear for Amy at the same time made that Shadamy part very in-character. Very nicely done and I thought that the way you showed out the Shadow vs Silver battle was really well done. About criticism... I spotted at least one or two spelling errors I believe, I'm not exactly sure but it was no big deal, nothing else really to criticize about. Nothing really to criticize at all about this chapter actually. Very well done and great job on this chapter. I can't wait for the next update. I felt like I waited forever for this update but I think the more time the writer spends on the chapter the better it is. Great job and looking forward to the upcoming chapter!

Yay! MORE!

Very interesting project.

Actually, when I watched Sonic 06 cutscenes, Elise the human personally wasn't what bothered me the most; it was the way Sonic's story was reduced to 'Sorry Sonic, but your princess was stolen again, now go and get her'. It was HIS anniversary game, and he was saving the girl again and again while Silver and Shadow got the meatiest parts of the plot. That just wasn't fair.

Connection with SatAM, as well as Sonic and Sally being proclaimed the main heroes, had me interested. Wow, I though, Sally definitely won't let herself drag behind the heroes; that's going to look more interesting than the original at least in some ways.

It actually did. The published chapters already look darker, more complicated and consistent than the game storyline itself. I like how you introduced the audience to economic problems connected with war - that's something you don't see in an average story. More details like Rotor working for GUN are an extra bonus.

The first chapter looked the best to me, which is not a surprise to you, I believe. Many characters, engaging starts of the plot branches, the action... the stuff. A lack of evident pointers to a person speaking after a scene change may be an issue, but you did a good work on making the narrator recognizable.

Chapter two's title fits it: I find it paler than the first one. The third one matches chapter one, though; it had a lot of insightful conversation and a fight, which a dribble of extra gore did good to. 4th chapter actually made me chuckle- yes, that seed/egg moment. Good job! Game scenario writers could have thought of details like this.

I think it was a good idea to replace 200 or so years with only 20. With that, you won't have to answer that tough question: how did the living creatures managed to survive for so long?

Chapter six... oh. The only chapter that made my eye twitch. Meph's story surprisingly makes sense, tying together gods, the Emeralds, the species... but I had problems picturing the whole scene. Mephilis chatting nonchalantly while Shadow was trying to make a mincemeat of him- I wasn't sure if I was supposed to take it seriously.

Mephilis's personality was changed in this story. He seems way more talkative and, well, erratic than his Sonic 06 self. He even reminded me of the Joker at some point... It's not a complaint, just a notice.

Chapters 7 and 8 were intense. In fact, there's a whole lot of action in the story; no such thing as a static chapter in sight. The action breaks out in the very beginning and keeps going on all the time; with a handful of insightful moments and suspense, it holds a reader like me steadily hooked. Knowledge of the game is not an obstacle in this case: seeing how you play with what Sonic 06 could offer, I can say the finale is still going to come out as a surprise.

Hoo well... now to the concrit part. There's a number of moments throughout the story I stumbled at.

In chapter six, Denise was said to be dead:
[Denise was the only member that wasn't here, as while coming here her transport had been bombed from above, terminating her life.]
Which didn't stop her from welcoming Sonic and Sally later on:
[While Bunnie, Antoine, Denise, and Elias all congregated around Sally]

[I swore lightly. "They all are deactivated Sally."] ch. 8
Probably Nicole was addressed to, not Sally

Sally's social status is a bit of a mystery to me. She's not only called both a princess and a queen in the narration; other characters address her differently in different chapters. Maybe it has something to do with a prequel, though - my bad, I haven't happened to read it.

Your writing skills are stunning, but the awesomness of the text is watered with occasional typos and grammar mistakes. PaP mentioned misunderstandings between its and it's; there's more of those in later chapters, as well as those your vs. you're, than vs. then things.

Chapter 1:
[To long.]; [for the rest of our lives] - dot forgotten; [gap was to far for me to jump]; [can still kick but!]

Chapter 2:
[theri lasers]; [put my hand over her's] - hers here; [Monkey-like] - unneeded capitalization; [more then 5 seconds rest] - than; [who's right leg] - whose;[the 'old fat man' ad my arm] - had, and I don't see why you had to use quotation marks; [a already dilapidated building] - an, I guess.

Chapter 3:
[even through] - though; [warlus'] - walrus's; [over their] - there; ["Can you save him* Shadow?"], [Honestly* Rouge,] - commas missing; [to complex] - too; [Holding the emerald] - quotation mark missed before that; [taller then me] - than.

Chapter 4:
[conscious being] - plural, perhaps? [to convenient] - too.

Chapter 5:
[IT was not much.]; [my numbs arms]; [Lynx face] - unneeded capitalization.

Chapter 6:
["I am to Amy. I am to."] - too; [Besides, There are], [the Cat and Hedgehog] - unneeded capitalization; [But your wrong] - you're; [give a danm].

Chapter 7:
[IN shock]; [HHis]; [your right], [Your right Silver] - you're; [His aura-covered forum] - form, no? [IN a hurry].

Chapter 8:
[Hacking into a Playstation would be harder then this.] - than... oh, and a nice one, by the way; [Well, God danm it!]; [more unexpected they anything else] - than; [Silver responded first.,] - extra point.

Phew... that's all I've noticed. Be more careful further on, please - the story deserves more polish.

Now, I'll be waiting for more chapters!

- Qwisse.

I would love to help you by giving you criticism but I truly could not find anything to criticize about. School's been having an effect on everybody (Including me) it seems and you were not late with this chapter. Very nice chapter. I hope Shadow gets better. Can't wait for the next chapter. I want to see more Shadow! Really awesome chapter anyway. As the last reviewer said, longer chapters are sometimes better then shorter ones and I believe that you are one of the best Sonic fanfiction writers here for long chapters. Keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next one!

Top Five Chapter quotes:

1. "I hate it when Sonic doesn't listen to me."
2. "Ah! Sounds like an invitation to a party!"
3. "Well folks, today, you get a piece of…nostalgic treatment as I whoop the asses…of these ancient machines!"
4. "Hey! Well you could at least give me an 'S' for showoff!"
5. "Hacking a Playstation would be harder than this."

ANYWAY, serious review time. Everyone was pitch perfect, and I feel like a broken record saying that, but you handle everyone so well that I can't help it. ._. Sonic's second POV was the crown of the chapter, and I can't even place into words how much I enjoyed it. Just awesome.

The chapter wasn't dragged out, either. It had just as much detail, character, description, and plot needed to pull a reader in and never let them go, and sometimes a longer chapter is needed to do juat thta. Of course, the same effect could be pulled off in a short chapter, but I'm just speaking generally. Your longer chapters seem to be your better ones to me, all my preferences aside. (But if you like going short, then don't let me stop you. Everything you've written so far hasn't failed to impress me. )

Finally caught up...I've been distracted and busy with school too, so that's why I'm super late. I'm in a great mood to get to writng now, so thank you for some much-needed inspiration as well.

-Child-

Heh, you should be satisfied- this chapter and all the others have been great. :)

At first, I was all, "Eh, another Silver and Blaze chapter", but after having read it, it was awesome! I'm glad that they met us again, and their questioning on morales and whatnot was way more impactful than it was in the game, seeing that Blaze was feeling the same way as Silver, unlike how she was in the game. Plus they're wisening up and actually considering that Mephilis might be leading them on.

So, we're in for something interesting next time? Time to check it out. ;)

Wh-what?! A piece of total crap? You're kidding, right? You're joking, you're putting up some sort of facade, aren'tcha?

That was flipping amazing.

Everyone was true to form from my perspective, and seeing Freedom Fighters 2.0 join up to form a game plan was awesome! The upgrades were very interesting (as was Tails' mannerisms. Seeing that he IS older now would provoke a more mature manner of speaking), Sally was in charge and focused, Sonic was spot-on, and the rest of the cast seemed natural too. So really, nothing wrong there.

But Shadow's part! Holy crow, that was the most epic thing I've read in weeks! Not only is Shadow in a losing fight against a being that's nothing more than a spirit, but said 'spirit' is spewing out their world's very own history, and if I didn't already have a headcannon established in my mind, I'd throw everything I've ever known out the window and believe that everything Mephilis said was nothing but the truth. It was written that well, and made perfect sense to me. Screw the length, you tell us what you need to in as many words as it takes! ('sides, I like longer chapters anyway). The Sonic OVA/Movie reference was a plus as well.

And Shadow himself...he was just full of pure win. Nothing more. Chuck Norris as a hedgehog.

My only true complaint was that Amy should've had a bit more spotlight. But since I'm biased to everyone else, that's hardly worth a speck of consideration in my book. ;

Total crap...I scoff at that. I'm just sorry I'm so late in reviewing this master piece of a chapter.