I actully started laughing at your Omake at the end.

If mura were to ride akashi, i can always see him getting crushed.

Well that's ruined that fantasy...

Can I translate this fanfiction into Vietnamese, please, i very want to show it to my friend but they can't understand English

How about precious? It sounds interesting!

I love your story! Can u make more of these?

I liiiike it and its 1AM, goodnight...good morning!

Hahaha...I'm a sweet lover too and yeah...I'd eat kuroko and kagami...I have plush toys of them ...so I can munch on their hands or something...I think I'll go try that now...

i am literally drowning in fluff i was like: "fuck! that's too cute! what?! aka-chin fucking blushes! jealous Atsushi is so fucking adorable!" i'm like that every chapter and i'll stop reading for a while and question the universe why am i not an anime character or why am i not a guy so i could be a fabulous gay. this fanfic' technically made out of sugar and sin. except the last chap. it's made out of miserable cliffhanger! oozing with blood! and sadness! and misery! i want smut! (lol, i'm such a perv!) i really like this author-san! hope you'll add more chapters!

This was so cute and funny and just awesome! I really loved it! Great, great job! XD

I JUST ASDFGHJKL

I DUNNO WHAT TO SAY I LOVE THIS FIC VERY MUCH

CUTE/ADORABLE/CLUMSY AKASHI IS MY GUILTY PLEASURE

MY HEART JUST EXPLODED ASDFGHJKL
/pukes rainbow

Ok, i honestly think the way you've written Akashi isn't all that OOC. I mean, in many fics i've read, they portray Akashi as this sadistic bastard who only thinks about his own benefits, but from what i've gathered from reading the manga, most of what he does is done to benefit his team and teammates, while keeping everything fair. It was even stated in the manga that Akashi knew Kagami was going to evade the scissors. I feel like he has his own strange ways of showing kindness that only Mura notices, and others mistake it as cruelty. Mura is the only one who can draw out the softer, more raw Akashi that he hides behind his Emperor and high-class exterior he built around himself that, as i understand so far, his rich family/father's expectations caused him to build.

Overall, i LOVE this set of stories there need to be many many more AkaMura/MuraAka fics, as i feel there are just a tad way to many AkaKuro (pretty low on totem pole for me, no offense) and MuraHimu (makes me wanna delete Himura from existence, i despise the couple so much), and this couple just isn't appreciated enough ;_;

Great job, and i wish there could be more of this, but sadly, it's marked as complete. Kudos to you for this awesome fic!

Ahh, I love this fic XD It's so cute :3 and may I suggest a word? I'm not sure if anyone has said it already, but I think 'Loud' would be interesting _

awsome fic! please update soon!.. XD

I want more fics with these two love it.