alexis smirking at her boyfriend jaden hey i love your kisses

omg this was so cute XD

I think it was great I'm writing I story myself that has Jaden, Jesse, Blair and a girl named Izzy.

Will there be a rewrite? It seemed pretty good to me, and original. :)

Nice not bad at all

Pretty clever:)

I thought this was really cute and liked it!

I love how you make them meet.

this is a really great story and i really enjoy reading it! keep up the great work!

Fantastic :D

Alright people that don't like this shipping(including Huguchimon or how you spell it) why bother reading look up Judai and Yubel or whatever it doesn't make sence if you no like why bother reading some people ship some people and they don't so stop complaining about you have your opinions we have ours ship Soulshipping or whatever but we have our shippings so at least give people good reviews like nice job or something I ship what I ship you ship what you ship what you want but you don't have to be mean about it so bout the story I love it.

To coincide for your author note request, I really liked the concepts you based this story around. Jaden's naivety, jaden and alexis meeting in the past and the petty squabbles between room mates! It would have made a great episode, don't you think? Although I do agree that the overall pace of the story does seem a tad rushed (but not extremely either), a problem I usually encounter when im trying to brainstorm for my stories. keep up the good work :)

Amazing story, but you could of actually made it a bit longer. Like Jaden whispers in her ear that he actually remembers the whole event.

I liked it alot. I thought it was pretty cute how they met :) i also found it funny how the boys changed subject and just started asking and teasing each other about their first crush.

That was a brilliant one-shot! I loved the funny convo the boys were having! Kind of reminded me of the convos the boys at my school have but there not nearly as funny as this! I found Jessie the funniest! And talk about a play-boy! "you seal a promise with a girl by kissing her on the lips" he set Jaden up!