Reviews for The Final chapter
animefreak2015 chapter 23 . 9/8/2017
Having just binge watched this, you caught the characters beautifully. Much as I love the actor, I hated Shadrack and he definitely got the end he so deserved. Thank you for this lovely tying up of Willa's journey to freedom.
Duren Thompson chapter 23 . 4/14/2016
Good tale. The beginning chapters were overly short and could be combined to just 1-2 pages, with a divider for changing scenes.

I like all the elements you pulled in-the voodoo doll, Willa's dad, a history of abuse-you managed to surprise me and satisfy at least some of my need for closure. The story, however focused primarily on Willa, really de-emphasizing Walter, Isabell and Leo. Most episodes have a main and a sub plot, or 2-3 ongoing story lines. I think this story could be made richer and more complex by adding more of the older character's story.

I think there is more story to be told- will you tell it?
MadHatter084 chapter 23 . 8/18/2015
Oh dude. It's so sweed. I totaly cryed of joy and nostalgia in this last chapter T_T
The finder chapter 23 . 9/20/2014
This is perfect.
Guest chapter 23 . 8/22/2014
I was so upset when it was cancelled and felt like the story wasn't over and was missing the closure to move on...then I read this story and finally got it...THANK YOU
Craig M Houck chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
This is a very believable and real possible 'solution' to yet one more great show being cancelled.
Excellent bit of crafty writing...and thanks
Theresa chapter 23 . 12/28/2013
So I was watching The Finder on Netflix today and got so annoyed that they left it like that. Thank goodness for your story! Wrapped up Timo and Willa's stories perfectly!
Finder sort of chapter 23 . 10/4/2013
How is this not more well known, it's freaking amazing.
MD chapter 23 . 8/10/2013
Loved it, I'm so glad you wrote it. It's amazing!x
Hayasam chapter 23 . 7/29/2013
I can't tell you how much I love this story. Just no words to explain it :) 3!
LifeFiction chapter 23 . 4/28/2013
Great story!
Fang and Altair chapter 23 . 2/8/2013
This is amazing. It's nice for there to be a fully fleshed out story like this. I wish there were more. You're a really good writer
zoe712 chapter 23 . 12/31/2012
Really good loved it
Erksum chapter 23 . 11/10/2012
OMG this is great. Definatly in my favs
Sorrel2009 chapter 15 . 10/29/2012
Can't believe you only have 2 reviews - this is a great story - can't wait for more!
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