Reviews for The Final chapter |
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animefreak2015 chapter 23 . 9/8/2017 Having just binge watched this, you caught the characters beautifully. Much as I love the actor, I hated Shadrack and he definitely got the end he so deserved. Thank you for this lovely tying up of Willa's journey to freedom. |
Duren Thompson chapter 23 . 4/14/2016 Good tale. The beginning chapters were overly short and could be combined to just 1-2 pages, with a divider for changing scenes. I like all the elements you pulled in-the voodoo doll, Willa's dad, a history of abuse-you managed to surprise me and satisfy at least some of my need for closure. The story, however focused primarily on Willa, really de-emphasizing Walter, Isabell and Leo. Most episodes have a main and a sub plot, or 2-3 ongoing story lines. I think this story could be made richer and more complex by adding more of the older character's story. I think there is more story to be told- will you tell it? |
MadHatter084 chapter 23 . 8/18/2015 Oh dude. It's so sweed. I totaly cryed of joy and nostalgia in this last chapter T_T |
The finder chapter 23 . 9/20/2014 This is perfect. |
Guest chapter 23 . 8/22/2014 I was so upset when it was cancelled and felt like the story wasn't over and was missing the closure to move on...then I read this story and finally got it...THANK YOU |
Craig M Houck chapter 1 . 7/16/2014 This is a very believable and real possible 'solution' to yet one more great show being cancelled. Excellent bit of crafty writing...and thanks |
Theresa chapter 23 . 12/28/2013 So I was watching The Finder on Netflix today and got so annoyed that they left it like that. Thank goodness for your story! Wrapped up Timo and Willa's stories perfectly! |
Finder sort of chapter 23 . 10/4/2013 How is this not more well known, it's freaking amazing. |
MD chapter 23 . 8/10/2013 Loved it, I'm so glad you wrote it. It's amazing!x |
Hayasam chapter 23 . 7/29/2013 I can't tell you how much I love this story. Just no words to explain it :) 3! |
LifeFiction chapter 23 . 4/28/2013 Great story! |
Fang and Altair chapter 23 . 2/8/2013 This is amazing. It's nice for there to be a fully fleshed out story like this. I wish there were more. You're a really good writer |
zoe712 chapter 23 . 12/31/2012 Really good loved it |
Erksum chapter 23 . 11/10/2012 OMG this is great. Definatly in my favs |
Sorrel2009 chapter 15 . 10/29/2012 Can't believe you only have 2 reviews - this is a great story - can't wait for more! |