| Reviews for The Blue Spirit |
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   Samanthap93 chapter 2 . 3/7/2014 Zuuuuukoooooo! I just fangirled for like 5 minutes, and it's way too late (early?) for it to be any kind of decent! But yay for older!Zuko |
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/7/2013 This is amazing! Please update! Please let them kiss soon |
| Twilight Woods chapter 10 . 10/30/2013 Loved it! Please update! Plz! |
| amanda chapter 10 . 9/10/2013 please finish this is good please please finish |
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/5/2013 Wow! Awesome! Please update sooooonnn! :) I really kinda hope that Korra wins... ;) |
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/1/2013 Fab chapter, continue! I want to know who wins and what's the favor is! |
| munchydino12 chapter 1 . 6/30/2013 I like the premise of this story and I'm curious as to how you'll incorporate an iconic element like the Blue Spirit from ATLA into a LOK universe. Some constructive criticism: Make sure you split your paragraphs accordingly. I see a lot of really big chunks that can be broken up. For instance, the paragraph that beings with "Bolin took off without hesitation" can be split again at "It's been almost 20 minutes". Also, try and keep the tense consistent. It sounds confusing when you suddenly switch to present tense at "It's been almost 20 minutes". Overall, it's a decent start and I hope you keep writing. Good luck! |
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/27/2013 Continue to the Makorra! (; |
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/3/2013 Continue it is lovely so far! |
| OtakuHarunaHimawari chapter 10 . 4/5/2013 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH THIS FANFIC OF YOURS IS AMAZING AND TRULY WONDERFUL! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE! REALLY AN AMAZING JOB! |
| Fishpuppy chapter 10 . 4/1/2013 IROSAMI! I SO TOTALLY SHIP THEM! Aha, for having writer's block, that sure was a good chapter. I hope you can find the inspiration to write again. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/1/2013 Oh my squash! I love this story! I read all of the chapters you have up this morning! I love the idea. It's kinda mysterious... :) I can't wait to see what happens next! I wonder what Korra will have Mako do if she wins... |
| name chapter 6 . 3/25/2013 BAM BAM BAM BAM HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHA HAHA -e- BAM BAM BAM BAM HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHA |
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/17/2013 How is the painted lady going to fit into all of this? |
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/17/2013 YESSSSS IROH WILL BE PART OF TEAM AVATAR! |
