Wow, that's weird, calling the floor above ground a first, that's just nuts. Okay, great story, but I wished that you hadn't stopped. Great story, and thank you for putting your time and effort into writing it,

Crazy Female LEPrecon

How I love the little traitor... I really like how, touch by touch, you show how Peter came to betray his friends.

God, but Peter is a pure genius! He really knows how to seize an opportunity! :)

What started as a nice-but-nothing-more story is becoming really interesting. Too bad it remains unfinished...

This was a great story. it;s depressing that you never finished it you are a great writer

Cool idea and I enjoyed reading the plot. Please update soon thanks.

WoW

i cried a lil when pete gave remus' mom to the death eaters, but i knew it was gonna happen! *tear*

i cant wait for more.

:D

Wow, it's been almost 4 years since you updated this. It's a shame there isn't more of it. It's a very well written fic. You did a great job with the characters too. I especially love how you write Sirius, over-protective and loyal. and how you made Peter start working for Death eaters was very well done and believable. Nice job. I really hope you decide to continue, I'd love to read more.

This is some of the most beautifully angsty 'Marauders suspect Remus' stuff I have ever read. Just such a shame you didn't finish it. Made me cry quite a few times.

I love the whole thing: the emotions mostly. It was so real and believable in a poignant way. Lovely. Peter is so... real, again. There is no point where I think 'He wouldn't have done that,' or 'That would never have happened.' Right down to the fact that he was the one who killed Julia, I believed every word. Amazing angsty stuff.

Also the way Remus being a werewolf affects them all. It works very well. Often, it doesn't seem to make any difference to them. I would love to think that's true; but, come on, they're only human.

Only regret: Remus and Sirius are straight! But I'm going to go off and read some of your lovely slash now to remind myself how perfect they are for each other.

Thankyou for this wonderful story. If you ever want to continue it, I will love you forever.

Wow, I really love your story. Let's make that plural. Stories. They are all so awesome.

I love this story! But, I am sad to discover that you haven't updated it in two years! Please, please,please, update, or I'll go out of my mind trying to figure aout what's going to happen.

this was so awesome! sorry about the grammer... it's one am!

I absolutely love this story. Sometimes when I am really mad or depressed I just read this and I feel better. I hope the story gets finished!

Good Luck!

o...I love this story! Heartwrenching, adventurous all rolled into one! Can't wait for the next chapter! Great job!

OMG i love this story! the characters were done very well and the plot keeps you guessing. your discriptions of peters betrayal is the best i have read so far. please e-mail me about whether or not you plan to continue

~kanaloa

This has to be one of my favourite fics. I envy how you can manage to keep a plot going; a skill I lack.
You've given me new insight on the world of HP. With a lack of anything else to say, most of the things I've said in some of your other reviews apply here aswell.