| Reviews for So You're LeavingThe Complete Novel |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2018 Please update soon . I love reading this story. |
| v9jSj chapter 1 . 9/2/2018 Veri n1c3f3Lst0riIW |
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/26/2018 Great Chapter! I love how you're writing Johnny's point of view. You write Dallas and Johnny so well. There is such a brotherhood between the two in your writing. So, Johnny has a horse,. I love it!. I can't wait to read more. Great chapter. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2018 I like the way you write Johnny's viewpoint in chapter 17. I also liked the interaction between Johnny and his Aunt. I like how he raised an eyebrow after she showed concern for his physical wellbeing. I hope you write some interaction between Johnny and Caroline. I know in the original that she was his girlfriend. I just wonder what caused them to hit it off. Excellent writing please keep it up. |
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/18/2018 I just love your Outsiders stories. I am so glad that you are working on this again. I loved your first version of it, too. I love the way you write Johnny and Dallas. I feel you have their personality, tone, and mood down well. Your other characters in this story are original and interesting, as well. I Love this story please continue and keep up the good work. |
| Dolphingirls chapter 15 . 8/17/2018 Wow I think I blinked like 30 times after seeing this... Not only are you updating! But you're proof that old stories can come back :D Look forward to more! |
 The Writing Wizard chapter 14 . 8/21/2014 What happens!? |
| RazMaster chapter 14 . 7/5/2013 PLEASE UPDATE THIS! |
| music842 chapter 1 . 2/20/2013 I really hope you continue with this, I love all of the extra detail you've added so far :) |
| Lex chapter 1 . 2/7/2013 Wonderful story, exceptional rewriting and characterization. All I ask is that you please, for Petes sake do not bring Caroline into this. And perhaps ease off the tension? As suspenseful and well-written as it is, ghost-boys scaring me somethin bad. Never-the-less, your greaser characterization is beyond par with original, and Dally breaking down as Johnny is hit with pangs of regret? Gorgeous. Awaiting in rapid anticipation, ThatFrenchChick |
| Lex chapter 14 . 2/6/2013 Its like your ripping my heart out. If no-one else, you got Johnny and Dallas "almost-romance" down to an art form. Glory halleluja kid, your good. Cheers, Lex. |
| Desertfyre chapter 14 . 1/26/2013 Love the look into Dallas head more. Look forward to the next chapter. Hope it's soon! |
| Hahukum Konn chapter 14 . 1/25/2013 I like this look into Dallas's mind :) |
| music842 chapter 14 . 1/21/2013 So happy seeing an update today, what an insightful chapter! Loved how you described Dally's premonition about Windrixville and Dally's concern about Johnny's depression. Looking forward to the rest of the story! |
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/21/2013 Awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
