Your writing is amazing and I loved every minute of it. I know that you probably won’t continue with this story but I still want to congratulate you on it, as it transported me into it’s world with the detail and effort put into it. Also I'm sorry that this sound really formal.

So you stopped writing the story just when it started to get good

dude, I don't know if you're going to continue this or not, but this story is really great and I really hope you'll update this someday. Thanks for writing this.

OMG

BEST FULLMETAL & HARRY POTTER FANFICTION EVER

I'm a bit speechless to be honest

it's 2 in the morning
I still have homework to do

Absolutely No Regrets Nada

awesome capturing of Ed's personality most on point interpretation I've come across, and that's saying something considering how many of this crossover I've read... Most of them.
Love literally everything... Casually not mentioning how out of the loop he is 1000/10
Being bomb at magic, because honestly of course 1000/10
Elric Charm on point and not excessive 100/10
Details 100000/10
Being so beautifully blunt about torture 1000/10
long fanfiction with lots of plot left 100/10
Imagining their reaction when they learn how he got in moldys head 1000/10
Breaking wands bc ppl call him short.. not just any wand but Mad Eyes 10000000/10
stroke of genius and consistently at that level

I know you haven't updated in a bit... I hope your okay and faithfully await your return oh magical one

Best Regards

Frankly, this is by far the BEST hp/fma crossover I have found till now. I LOVE how yoy portray Ed and how he loves his little brother, his stubborness, his need to show off... AGHHHH, I LOVE IT! You have his personality down pat, and how you portrayed his power. I mean, he leveled the floor in a display of accidental magic AND apparated inside a Fidellius charm without even knowing he had magic... I really, really hope that you are going to continue this story some day.

So great ! This is like, Ed really shitty, hellish, fucking week (or however long he stays with Voldemort, directly after the Promise Day). I can totally imagine Ed, the twins, and Sirius, just wrecking havoc. The magical world is not ready for them to meet and act together.
The link with Amestris is also really nice ! And Ed trying to act all though and stuff while being mother-hennedThanks for sharing, I do not know if you've planned to continue, but if you choose so I would love to read the follow-up of their adventure !

To be honest i think this is my favourite out of all of your hp/fma fics! I love the premise, you use it really well and if fits quite well into ed's personality. You seemed to have an idea as to where it was going, would you ever consider continuing it? I love your writing style, and you characterize so well (which cant be said for a lot of fma fics, theyre all usually so overdramatised but you keep it balanced!) I doubt with all the other -equally great- writings you have ongoing that this will be continued, but i needed to thank you for it nonetheless!

This is a pretty wicked fic! I definitely will check back on it. I love how slowly Ed gets introduced to the world, and even better how not everybody trusts him immediately or without a decent reason. It makes he world that much more believable.

Wow. This is great! I would love it if you would pick it up again.

Really enjoying this- the character interactions are perfect!

Is this the end for this price of art?

Awesome. Brilliant. There are hundreds of words I could use to describe this, not a single one negative

It is such a pity that this story was abandoned. While it wasn't the most polished fanfic, it was highly entertaining and nicely paced. Despite it being 2 years since it was last updated, I still hope the author eventually returns to it.

You really conveyed Ed's strength - brilliant story! Please update!

Wonderful story! I can't wait to read some more someday xD