So I'm going to start by saying I have no idea who it was.

But whoever you are, this was great. I'm a sucker for any TeddyLily but this really catered the raw brokenness to their relationship. I loved that Lily was just so brazen, but she caved in to Teddy. And Teddy's character… unf ;) great job!

Oooh, Summa likeyyy!

Okay so. TEDDYLILY, ALWAYS GOOD ALWAYS GOOD. Flighty!Lily, even better. Pregnant!Lily…? YOU ARE MY FAVE OK

So I love the characterizations, gow could I not. I like the dialogue a lot too, you picked all the right words without overdoing it and just, the language and flow was all good. I have zero complaints, this is one for the favorites! :3

Excellent work, whoever you are!

Always,
Summer

Oooh, mysterious...
I really liked this, it was short but...er, not sweet, but...fascinating. Lots of sexual tension ;) I really liked the descriptions of atmosphere and tension and all the emotions and omg, amazing. The writing was gorgeous, and the characters were flawed but wonderfully real. I loved how Lily was described as full of wanderlust because that is like my favourite phrase rn and I just loved this.
It was amazing :)

-Kat x (and I have a guess!)

This was really good for a drabble - I mean, I don't even like TeddyLily but the prose with which this was written is amazing! I Teddy doesn't want to forgive her, and Lily's pregnancy a shicking twist. Yup

Wow okay so I actually haven't the faintest clue who wrote this, but getting away from the detective challenge thing for now what a great little story!

I trust the writer will check here because I'd hate to sing unheard praise. I liked it because it was short but to the point just like I imagine Lily as she takes a drag of her cigarette holding out the stick to a stunned Teddy, you got a feel of their relationship without them even being in one and just AGH, I really liked the writing style, okay.

I wish I knew who wrote this, you're fab and I'm awful with reviews. XOXOXO ha.

Whoever wrote this, I actually love you.

I think it's absolutely brilliant; it's short, but it's to the point and I really like the relationship portrayed between Teddy and Lily-they split up but they still need each other.

AND SHE'S PREGNANT.

I thought that that was a really good twist, and that the last paragraph all being one continuous, extended sentence showed their feelings better than anything else.

I DON'T KNOW WHO IT ISSSSSSSSSS. :(