I know where you got this from. I've read the original version of this. A nice story.

AWSOME! like a true poet (partly) ;)

This Fanfiction was wonderful! Go Mikuo x Rin! XD

cute

O.o
poor Mikuo...
but i loooove sad story like this!

Oh. My God.
This was like, the sweetest, most beautiful poetry/prose I have ever seen written in a long time. I absolutely love it.
I love Mikuo's phrase- "One foot in front of the other"- and I love the story line. I'm not kidding, this made me sadder than most tragedies.
I love this bittersweet story between them, and I love Mikuo's attitude.
I look forward to more by you.
(I was actually planning to write a story with this, except with Len and Rin, haha.)
Sayonara for now
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