Reviews for The Harlequin
hopefuladdict chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Greatly enjoyed the read. Thank you for posting it.
Anie92 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Hi! I liked that story. :)

In my opinion this story just perfect as it is. So if you would like to write more, it should be another story. :)

And keep up good work.
S.A chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Wow I must say it's quite interesting,this that is. Would you perhaps mind a sequel? Please? I beg of you but if you find that you cannot, may I? Pleasssssssse? I'm in case you wanna give me a reply as to wether I have permission to do so, yes? Please once more a sequel is very much nedded ?!
OneGlanceGirl chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Poor Ciel
Strawberries-and-Darkness chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Wow... Just wow! Cool ending!
Phantom Ou chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
What a magnificent piece. Grammar-wise, it is impeccable except for sentences such as this: '"They're all the same." he spat.' The period after 'same' should be a comma, because the end of what he said does not signify the conclusion of the sentence as a whole, particularly since 'he spat.' is added at the end. If this sounds confusing, I am sorry, but it is difficult to explain this concept (or at least it was entirely I who makes it more befuddling than it has to be).

But, anyway, enough about that. I found this quite interesting indeed, exceptionally at the revelation at the end and his inner monologue. It is tragic to see what has become of the name 'Ciel Phantomhive'. It was sweet how he still thinks of her as someone of significance, and how he wishes not to disrupt her peace. Must I add, their speeches correlate with the Victoria era, so kudos to you. Great story, overall. I hope you will write more! (Perhaps, a continuation?)
1 Hell of a Monster chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
... I was not expecting that... Ah, I can't for more! Hopefully...