You gave Bumi and Kya kids ... why couldn’t you give Lin?

Love it

Best rendition of what happened between Tenzin and Lin I have ever read. So believable. So painful. The way you write them is so tragicchildhood best friends become lovers who just cannot work. They want to, they love each other, but their futures take them where the other cannot go. Beautifully done. Definite hit me in the feels.

rip aangy

You are honestly an amazing writer, you have a talent when it comes to this. I have read all your stories and honestly they all move my emotions, I think you have potential to go bigger.

I really enjoyed your story of the Tenlin breakup. I love Pema (And Pemzin) so I hate when people make her out as a bad guy. If you ever write Pemzin I would be the first to read it, you have a definite talent.

That was so amazing and heart felt

I loved it, I wanted the second book show flashbacks of the past on linzin, how she got her scars with tenzin and lin parted ... would be fantastic, but I think it will not show, but it never hurts to dream, right

Egads nooooooooooooo...
That hurts me in far too many ways.
Beautiful story, but it hurts.

arghghghgh my creys :'((

that was so excellently done, and I really enjoyed the way you portrayal of Lin and Tenzin as a couple!

Really good fic! I really loved the Toph/Lin exchange. It would be really cool you wrote a fic about Pema and Tenzin. We know that Pema loved him but how did he come to love her? Anyways, I thought you did a great job. I imagine that's how they really did react when they broke up for the last time.

Wow. That was one amazing fic.

I think you captured Toph's and Lin's personality PERFECTLY! I especially love the mother and daughter exchange between them in the first part :)

this entire thing is wonderful.
you've got the characters down - impressive for legend of korra since we get so little of the characters to begin with. congrats!

hard to pick my favorite line? not at all. i am in love with this:
"No, Lin," he told her, "I kept those precious gems to myself."

you are hilarious. and gifted. write on!

So sad, but damn. You may be the best Avatar fanfic writer. Everyone is so perfectly in character, sometimes I wonder if you're secretly Mike or Bryan.

the feeeels... this was so good, please write us more angsty linzin ;_;