No.. THANK YOU. You did do good. Better than that actually. I think you managed to actually write something absolutely fantastic. And I think you made a good call in making this story more realistic.
Very Well Done and Thank You Once Again For Writing This Fanfic. Bye bye!

For someone who didn't watch Naruto and Naruto Shippuden all the way through, you achieved a fan fiction that immersed the reader into the Naruto verse. You also portrayed Itachi wonderfully. I was so absorbed in reading that I forgot to post comments on all the previous chapters. This was a great fan fiction and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.
-JFDragonFire

This story was amazing. Not overreacted drama etc

BUT WHY CANT PEOPLE GIVE UIM A MICE ENDING. WHYYYYYYYYYYYY

I have always found for some reason Itachi cute l. And you have made him cuter!

Loving it so far.

God, you're amazing. Horribly sad, but amazing nonetheless. I have also read the story of Rei Yukimura, but didn't know it was yours until this author note. Anyway, congrats. Great development of the plot AND consistent writing, it's difficult to find both in a fanfic. I'll look forward to your next story.

Good god this story made me sob

The feels .-.

I cried too much. I am sad and emotional now. Your story was absolutely amazing though but boy am I feeling them feels

this is an amazing story!
it's pretty sad though that they can't be together
with itachi died and all
but i love the story!
the plot is amazing and i like it very much
though i wonder what if sasuke meet hanako and amaya?
i'm curious of his reaction and all bcuz amaya is itachi's daughter and sasuke's niece
anyway good story!
keep up the good work!
stay awesome! XD

This story was too short for me ;-; it ended too faast.. but still it was better than the other naruto fanfics xD

I'm so mad and so sad! all these mixed feelings. i wish there was a way to change the ending. but good job though. you make it seem more realistic that way

will forever be in love with the story.

Omg!

Kumo!

XD

Omg!

What?!

O-O

She's actually an Uchiha, or at least has Uchiha blood? Is that why she can be so hateful of people sometimes?