This is bloody fabulous, it's more about what they are feeling then what they are doing and I love that so much. The raw emotion behind this is so fantastic, hot damn, I could see that this happened canonically behind the scenes.

You are SO good.

I wish this was longer. I love these two!

This is a lovely fic. I agree that heir relationship is a tough one, but you seemed to pinpoint exactly what drives their love for each other-hatred.

Wow! That was wonderful! I think you captured them both so well. I especially liked how there were no gentler emotions between them. Oh, and it was hot too!

Wow extremely gud story.

This is an amazing story 3