Interesting start to this. Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next.

i like this ichika. he's going to be interesting

F***ing awesome man, really need t roll out the updates quicker though.
As for grammar I see no probs and the fights did play out better than you think, but yeah a beta could give you tremendous help in writing so keep looking.
Till next time, peace.

nice description, felt like i saw it...also one word missing at the beginning of the story "lucky day"...would like to see it continue...

Now this this is originality right here (with some references to other IS Fanfics like fujin's). Already excited for the next chapter. Now lets see how this plays out.

An interesting start.

Awesome stuff man. I'll look forward too see how you go on with this. :)