I would love to see a new chapter from you. It is not fair to leave a good story unfinished.

Excellent story. Just couldn't stand that Sofia woman. Not sure why CSI would bring her back again and again since she's good at nothing but making fish face at Grissom whenever she had the chance. I would love to find out if you will come back with the next update or not!

Please update. I adore your writing love.

As a fellow south african, I have to say I'm enjoying this. And, I have to add, I don't necesarily trust the company sara now finds herself in...

Great chapter

Sara, you're asking for trouble.

Griss, just blew it. Sara reached out to him for help. He thinks she's been drinking, and hangs up on her, when she needed him the most. Glad that sara will be ok. Griss still thinks that sara is involved with a guy named chris. Like chris her neighbor's dog. I don't think sara will want to talk to griss. She will still be angry for how he treated her. What's up with sara's reports? Who's messing with her work, I smell a rat. Great chapter, loved all the interaction between sara and the guys at the hospital. Please update soon.

I read all the chapters tonight. Excellent story! Love the similitude to the early seasons of CSI. It's like watching an episode of season 3. Great job!

At least Brass can cut to the chaise.

Excellent chapter! As always Grissom can't explain his feelings to Sara. Hoping they could sit and talk about it. Maybe next chapter?

That was good. Will Sara sneek out of the hospital?

I didn't think Grissom would be so stupid as to think she was drunk.

Aw man you can't just leave it on a cliffhanger like that :'( update sooooon please

As always Grissom acted like a jerk. I can't wait to read the next chapter and enjoy his reaction. Great chapter. Good old CSI times.

Great chapter. I was worried about sara and that pain. I wonder did this nieves guy poison her. Mad that sara questioned his niece, and he probably knows sara was at his hotel. They consider sara a threat. Grissom, I'm mad at him, for thinking sara had been drinking. Glad that sara made it to the hospital without crashing. But what is wrong with her? One small victory for sara against ecklie. What will happen next. You left me on the cliff hanging, but I forgive you, if you don't take too long to post an update. Must know how sara is doing.