Reviews for The One He Forgot
Cookiemonsta2001 chapter 15 . 7/18/2014
NOT AMY!
timano chapter 20 . 6/15/2014
I know this story isn't new, but I've only just come across it (and finished it)-I did enjoy it! 10 out of 10 stars,
QHman chapter 20 . 3/27/2013
I bet it is the girl that jalen sees that the others cant
Sephri chapter 20 . 3/26/2013
Aw I have to say emotional train wreck pretty much sums that up. And, may I guess that one of the Doctor's children come back? I haven't gone that far back so I'm not sure what their names are but... maybe? Anyway, I like the name and I like the character. He's definitely the Doctor's son :3
Sephri chapter 8 . 3/23/2013
This is so intriguing! Loving how many characters you've brought in :3 Please keep it up!
greeneyesCutie chapter 17 . 3/19/2013
Serious cliffhanger! Poor Rory, I just love him.
greeneyesCutie chapter 14 . 3/18/2013
Huge,! Smiles! God this is a smashing story!
greeneyesCutie chapter 12 . 3/18/2013
If the Doctor chooses River! over Rose( the very core of the Doctors hearts!) I will hate this amazing story! Because as one other amazing writer said" I ship Rose and The Doctor like FeD X"!
Pig-Rabbit-Suk chapter 17 . 3/17/2013
Well that planet was not expected.
SittingOnTheEdgeOfTheUniverse chapter 17 . 3/16/2013
This story is crazy. Jalen is just killin left and right, the Doctor is just so easily giving up, killing off companions like crazy and no one even seems to be upset about it. And now they're on Gallifrey. Jalen is going to be trouble. Great chapter!
SittingOnTheEdgeOfTheUniverse chapter 16 . 3/7/2013
Uh oh! Rose has been taken and Jalen has been transformed. This cannot be good. I am nervous about who will die next bc I know your going to kill someone!
fantasyfeme chapter 15 . 3/4/2013
Ahhh you can't leave us like this! Am grateful for all that is posted, but come on! I'm still trying to figure out what the heck is going on and how all have come together!
BooksAreMyVideogames chapter 15 . 3/2/2013
Wow... ok, I've caught up on your story! But now you've got to update! Yeah! Because it's fantastic! XD
BooksAreMyVideogames chapter 13 . 3/2/2013
Oh yeah. Mini-Moffet. :P
SittingOnTheEdgeOfTheUniverse chapter 15 . 3/1/2013
Oh no Amy! Poor Rory. I'm so glad that Ross & the Doctor are finally together together again. The fight between Jalen and the Doctor was intense. They have some series issues to work on anyway. Those 3 needs some time alone. Plus, I guess this means Rose & the Doctor can't have anymore children. That's sad.
Great chapter! Awesome job!
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