This was a fun story! Kudos!

Awesome story! Many kisses!

Well thanks to you, I have it in my head and on repeat on my computer.

It's love at first sight I'm telling you!

Bite her to "death" or "bite" her to death?

This story was... amazing. I love wolves, I love guns, I love badassery, I love wildlife, and I certainly do love Hibari Kyoya. And you'd included all of it into this book. I love you and I'm so content with your writing I could kiss you! I love this! From the pissy arguments to the wolf's (RIP Alpha) adorable protectiveness *wipes tears* to the action! OH MY GOD THE ACTION WAS AWESOME! I love it, and cannot convey my adoration for this book any simpler! I got shivers reading and absolutely could not put this down to review until the very end! I would really love to see how Charles interacts with the pack of wolves now that their Alpha's gone. I miss the wolf...

You are an amazing human being that wrote this beautiful, beautiful story. Marry me. PLS. I AM KIND OF KIDDING I MEAN LIKE CAN I STEAL YOUR CREATIVITY AND WRITING TALENT?!

thaks for this fic!its really really good!

*sigh* Kusakabe-san, how can you trust people so easily? Stuttering, almost incompetent guy? Classic disguise.

"He's worse in his younger days" *snort* Now isn't that a understatement.

Poor Dakota. He was cute.

Also, I find this fic unsettling and uncomfortable. Mostly because it doesn't have the same atmosphere as typical KHR verse, more of a canon character dumped into another universe. The USA is practically oozing with its foreign-ness and just how out of place the Skylark is. Practically Twilight Zone man. But otherwise, aside from the magical rainbow flames, box animals and typical Hibari behavior to remind me that yes this is actually KHR then everything's pretty decent on Charlie's side of backwoods America.

In the first few chapters, I almost thought you'd pull a werewolf on me because packs. *snort*

AHHHH I COULDN'T EVEN REVIEW FOR MY MIDTERMS BECAUSE I GOT HOOKED UP IN YOUR STORY.

I'm pretty much excited how you would introduce Charlie to the mafia, if ever she would be involved in it XD keep up the good work!

Awesome story i actually like the oc that's in the story :)

I loved her last thought.

I'm amusing myself with the works of trying to sound like Charlie and trying to play the part of Hibari Kyoya. I didn't know which once sounded worse. Kyoya has to be one character that I would love to toy with in reality. To be frank with you, I indulge, ( does that sound too strange?) myself in reading about a weak Kyoya. :)

Ah, the classic sponge bath. How we would all love to give TYL Kyoya one. Of course, I am joking. I'd rather run five miles then do that to a grown man. He has too much pride within himself, that Hibari Kyoya. This character and the minor conflicts shaves off his egotistic pride. Must I say something about that Joey? That man Joey seems suspicious. In your fiction, I guess every new character in this story is suspicous. Must I say another thing before I end this? Yes, I have to. Kyoya is an egotistical ass. He's one person I would actually enjoy seeing beaten down. It would bring me loads of joy. Oh, another thing. Coincidence, my sisters had left to Las Vegas. I may or may have not mentioned it at all. I find it quite amusing. I'll be getting a souvenir. Frankly, I'd rather have a fiction with Hibari Kyoya being pride stripped than a I love Las Vegas shirt.

More about Charlie. I love it, her small talk about her family was a good idea. Although, she seems to not know alot about her own family past. I'm glad there is a sequel to this story. I want to learn more about her. Just so you know, Kusakabe is my favorite minor character, he deserves an award for all the mess and terrible things Kyoya creates. I like this chapter, it shows the development of your OC. That is a good thing. I love to see how writers develop their characters. It adds an interesting pop. :)

Really, you amuse me to no end Tide. I have to just laugh at Kyoya. A wolf. Kyoya is not hallucinating. When I first read this, my initial though was...Dakota? I actually wouldn't mind my friend, Charlie to slap him in the face. Haha, serves Kyoya right to sleep on the couch. Well, onto the next chapter...