Great story
You really understand their relationship

I keep coming back and rereading this story from start to finish. I can’t get enough. I love the twist of fate and I love the writing style. I’m never going to lose this story from my favorites. Great job!

Very brilliant idea, the programing that Madame Kovarian had done to poor River! It just makes a lot of sense and adds up perfectly to the actual canon! Truely brilliant!

Brilliant! I wisehd they'd had this happy ending!

I love how you portray the doctor!
And the verse is beautiful!

hey there. I've been searching the fanfiction archive and tripped over your story and I simply need to tell you that I already love it and I can't wait to read the rest of it!
Your writing is beautiful and very fitting!
I wished we saw more of River and the Doctor on the show!
But it's a good thing that we can still make up so much about their story and write about it!
Brilliant job! thanks for sharing this!
xxx Jane Bennett

superbe

I absolutely loved this story! It was really captivating, as well as both funny and sweet.
Please write a sequel! I really want to know more about River and the Doctor, about whether Amy and Rory have more children, or even River and the Doctor having children. I want to know where their lives go from here :)
Mischief managed,
Rachel

I wish I wasn't enjoying this so much, I'm supposed to be in school :(
You have a lovely story

A wonderful story! :)

OOOH! I can't tell you how much I LOVE this! It sounds just like a series of Doctor Who episodes, including all the timey-wimey and Doctor technobabble - AND it's 11/River, my absolute favourite pairing in the entire show - AND the plot is such that it gets them their happy ending! And how very Steven Moffat-like to have River be the one who subconsciously screwed up their timeline thanks to the programming by Madame Kovarian - genius! I did not see that one coming.

Your writing is very polished, and I am in awe of how you managed to come up with and execute a plot like this. Everything makes sense, everything is explained, and the way the Doctor saved River at the Library is very well done indeed. One of my all-time Doctor Who favourite stories, for sure.

Thanks for a terrific read!

when i read this i was listening to neon lights just loved it so much

Seriously awesome loved it

Loved this story! It would definitely read a sequel if there were to be one!

I loved the romance between the Doctor and River. Also, how you added all the Gallifreyan history! This was very well written and a great plot! The characters didn't seem to be ooc at all! I'd love to see you do more Doctor Who

P.S. I loved Donna in here!

Dramatic and whimsical and true to the characters, I love this. Thank you.